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for obsession

by janas

schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had never like Anzu (or Honda, but that's beside the point) before I read this, I still don't like Anzu but I like what you have done to her character. She does seem the type to manipulate the situation into revenge and a benefit to all who seek it. I'm glad that Jou and Seto will be getting what they want because we all know that they can be so dense sometimes. Waiting for an update. Keep up the good work.
person LY37
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was laughing so much. Thanks! I can't wait for the next chapter.
person lokivsanubis
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it update soon. Can't wait for the lemon.
person dragonlady222
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this. Good story.
person LadyVirgo91656
schedule May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the premise so far. Please update.
person baker
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was oh so good ***** stars for you
person kitten
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was good. I liked it. Can't wait to see waht happens to Honda. I would like to know how Jou feels a little bit more though. All in all, wonderful story. Keep writing.
person Maggiemay
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* I really do like an obsessive Seto Kaiba. *smiles* Ya can tell by my stories. ANd you write him so well. Can't help but wonder exactly what Seto is going to do with that hair. Heee...a clone? A voodoo doll? A love potion? An aphrodisiac? LOL..the possibilities are endless. This seems a bit familiar...is it posted somewhere else?

Good beginning...can't wait to see what else you do with it.


Maggiemay
person Shizi
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can really imagin that room of seto with all Joeys things in it *starker*
Eventhough I can't think of seto rehiering the staff (just seems weak) i like that idea of him showing some ...lets say emotion*g* or rather outburst*fg*
CU
Shizi
person Dragon Kiana
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*laughing out loud* Seto is too much..can we say 'LOVESICK PUPPY'. Please update soon. Love your story *hugs*