rate_review Reviews

i don't normally like this kind of fic; but this is a very believable and appropriate amount of violence. (Ryou wouldn't be walking around with all his ribs broke and his whole face a bruise like it's a papercut!) Bakura disappearing like he did actually works too, he'd want to see the Yami-gumi's reaction. the 'match made in hell' line was funny, and the movie quote was used well.(not to mention being absolute truth!)

i loved how the dirty thoughts were in parenthesis, separating them from the normal ones. you got both of their personalities across well.

good story

Fuck, that was awesome. Why is it that some people can't understand that there are those who enjoy pain?