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for Not-So-Bad Bad Day

by Ykarzel

person Animom57
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
heehee, that last line was perfection, and made me much to grin.
person seth kaishi
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. really good, ^___^ keep it up and mind to tell me when the next time u put up a charpter, i would really like to read it! thank you! bye!
person Sammei
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was cute! Haha, that was just like Seto, too. Poor Jou. Great job. ^_^ If you hadn't said this was only a ficlet, I'd be crossing my fingers for a followup.. maybe like Jou going over to Seto's house to say thank you and they end up having a nice romantic date or something? Or maybe Seto just shoves medicine down his throat and foces him to take it easy. Heh. Oh well. Guess I'll find out if you plan on writing more. ;)