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for Make Me New

by Kugatsu

person Wicabeth
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
!! Aww! I almost forgot poor little Ryou was suffering without Dartz =( *ferociously cuddles him* I don't like seeing Ryou sad! But at least Bakura is there more often to watch over him <3
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HI! Your back! Yay! hmm....is dartz..cheating? he doesn't seem like the type..neither does seto....:tilts head: I mean dartz was all in love with ryou and wooed him and was so great to him....people do change but.....:puppy face: please don't break ryou and dartz and seto and bakura up? But then again it is you fic...speaking of which...I wrote that fic I spoke to you about..the one where I took pairings and elements from your fics in this universe? It's called 'Busting thorough Barbed wire' and I am personally invitine you to read it and bestow your wonderful thought and comments among me! see-ya! Keep writing!
person FLAMES!!!
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! I hate this! This is horrible! Seto and Dartz freaking cheating together? Just so you could continue this series. Seto and Bakura were perfect together; Dartz and Ryou maybe could break up but putting him with Seto? Ew! Not to mention how incredibly OOC it is for Seto to *ever* cheat on anyone. He's such a loyal person - look how he is with Mokuba. He wouldn't go back on a commitment like he'd made with Bakura, especially in such a jackass backhanded way.

Gah.