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by Kugatsu

person Black Ice
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! What's going to happen to Yami, Ryou, and Bakura!? There's just something so very wrong with Yugi and Marik fucking while Yami is in the other room crying... T_T

Marik's sleeping alone tonight, HE'S the sucker. ^-^ But more importantly...AN ALRAM CLOCK ENCASED IN RUBBER!? Where's the fun in that!? Oh well, I'm sure Yugi will find some way to smash it. *evil smile*

Black Ice is feeling lazy too.
person BlacKat
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
T_T I feel like crying after reading the new chapter it's just so sad and a lot of things are really changing TT_TT *sob* but hopefully it'll turn out good in the end...hopefully TT_TT *full out bawling* POOR RYOU!
person Black Ice
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OO Woah...Shocker! Sort of. I was kind of expecting Yami and Atemu to break up. But I'm glad Seto and Bakura are still safe. What's going to happen to Ryou? Damn it, Dartz! *whacks* And I SO called the Honda/Espa coupling!

*laughs* Akefia fell in the dishwasher! He is all that and a bag of chips. Man, I'm so happy Kimi ga Iru started up again!
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! YOUR BACK!! great story! I love it!!

MiM
xXx
person Black Ice
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
P.S. Sudden thought: are Ryou and Atemu going to end up together? I mean, Ryou was in love with Atemu for awhile and they both are in bad spots with their lovers rigth now (Ryou and Dartz is going down the toilet.) Whatever happens, Yugi/Marik, Jou/Varon, Otogi/Malik, Mokuba/Noa, and Seto/Bakura better not be destroyed! TT.TT
person BlacKat
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...-.- I'm startin' to doubt a bit on the Kaiba/Dartz theory I mean Dartz(the main cheater) could be sleepin' with anyone :shiver: hell he could be sleepin' with Honda for all we know...>.> that reminds me what is the point in bringing back Honda into the story? I mean it's nice to see Espa but not Honda T_T Espa should be happy TT_TT and so should RYOU!!!
person Aino Hikaru
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You tease! I thought for sure Kaiba and Dartz were going at it!!! I though that back in the last two one shots actually! Glad you're doing more Kimi Ga Iru, though i think the neko fic wil always be my fav. It was the first one i read, you see, then I fell in love with it and read the Kimi ga Iru. Yes, yes, I ignore warnings and all that, But I don't bitch about the warnings I ignored when I get lost or offended (either rarely happens), SO IT'S OK!!!!

Love Akefia! Always protecting Ryou from everyone else, it's so sweet!

Sorry I don't have much to say other than, "I look forward to more", so, I look forward to more! Bring it on!!! Crack kills!! lol
-Hikaru
person Wicabeth
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
;.;!!! *beats Dartz* How could you hurt little Ryou like that? *sniff!* Bakura needs to make him feel all better again *cuddles Ryou*
person sirithiliel
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! ryou and dartz are still together, and bakura and seto are still together! wait...do i like that? i think bakura and ryou would be great together! darn...hmm...oh well! author's decision! a home of our own part II!!!! i'll definitly be checking for it! great job!
person Lady Laran
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I want to run a sword through Dartz and Amelda right now. Honda just needs to be castarated and be done with it. Grrr....poor Yami and Ryou!!! *pouts* You'd better make good for them! *mock glares* please???