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for Make Me New

by Kugatsu

person Halloween
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O NOOOOO!!1 not cool man! not cool! To much Bakura and Ryou! To much! please let Seth and Daz see how they hurt Barkua and Ryou?

O.O PLEASE?! I love Seto and Bakura and Daz and Ryou! Y,Y the only onces not ruined aee Mailk, his Yami, Yugi and Duke.


person Aino Hikaru
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Now everyone's going psycho! I'm glad Dartz dropped the charges, got he's been such an ass. He should've just been upfront with Ryou. I'd watch my back if I were Seto though...

I do wish you had kept the SetoxBakura pairing though... me likey... but I understand. The story needed the closet psycho and the soiciopath (sp?) to lose it. Akiefa's evilness was cute as always! ...hmmm... actually, he reminds me of my own evil kitty...

Woo.. look at that. A whole lotta ramble and no substance. Sorry about that. Glad to see you back and in action! It makes my day, really!

Thank you!
-Hikaru
person Black Ice
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG!!! I haven't reviewed in forever! When I first saw the update, I got so excited that I ended up wiping out my energy and by the time I finished reading, all I could think of was sleep. --; I also want to apologize for starting a review fight. I just got really mad, I shouldn't have done that and I will refrain from it in the future. I think it's over now 'cause Red Dragon gave a good, final-like blow, but I still fell real bad. Gomen.

On a more cheerful (?) note: I can picture this happening so badly!!! You have such a way of capturing the essence of the characters; it's sheer brilliance! I keep picturing a broken Bakura standing before Seto wearing jeans and a purple or green sweater in the rain and somehow tell Seto that he can't do anything to him because he loves him too much. It just feels so right to me. I should draw that when my artistic talents become capable of producing something that resebles what I'm trying to create... Oo;

And of course: UPDATE! (You are lucky it was adultfan's fault you couldn't update for MONTHS...jk ;P)
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YESA!!! I'm SOOOOOOO Glad your back! *hugs* I can't wait for the next chapter and for some reason, I know it's going to rock! Awww I feel sorry for Bakura he's the real victim in all of this
person sirithiliel
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heehee....go bakura
person Wicabeth
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
=( Is Bakura going crazy now? He has to stay sane for Ryou! Sorry I can't write more, I'm sick and exhausted.
person sirithiliel
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! i've been watching this for months and months and months! yay for more stories now! :does a happy dance: oh no....depressed bakura...
person Zoe
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
T___T So angsty! *cuddles all the YGO charas* I feel so bad for Ryou-kun...Dartz is an ass! *throws her old shoe at him*

But hot damn, your stories are still so freaking awesome...^___^ I love all the twists and plot changes and stuff!! *does a dance* I'm confused though...what did Yuugi do that angered Ryou and upset everyone else? ...Anywhos, I can't wait for part 8 and once again kudos to j00 for such a wonderful fic! ^^
person BlacKat
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! It's been such a long time since I've seen this story being UPdated T_T YAY!!! Well anyways lovely 2 new chapters but it's so heartbreaking to see Ryou and Bakura's condition >.> stupid Kaiba and Dartz! Hopefully it gets better somehow later XP
person Mana-sama
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O__O Omg... you haven't updated this in like.... forever... O__O Dun make us wait any longer! Especially with a cliffhanger like that~ O.O