rate_review Reviews

Oh god…
You're one of the authors I've truly enjoyed breezing through their work. Know why? Because you can practically see the change and growing up you've been through in your fics. Your first ones were light hearted, mushy, oozing with sex and good jokes. They were enjoyable on their own, and what's more amazing… you've created your own little universe which may not have been too true to the show, but was amazingly pleasurable to read. You must be one of the funniest writers I've had to pleasure to read. Seriously.
But slowly it changed, you developed- your characters' relationships became less about sex and more about actual relations. Take one of you latest pairings- Varon and Jou. They got together purely on the basis of understanding each other, and it seems to work so, so well.
You haven't written in this fandom for almost 4 years. Which is a shame. I was looking forward to see where this is going. I don't even know if you'll even read this comment, but if you do… just so you know, you rock, and if you'd ever decide to write fiction again you'll have one guaranteed reader.

I was wondering if you were ever going to continue it. I want to know what happens.

i understand what you mean about returning to the fandom. i have a story i want to finish for yugioh as well under a different account i came to read your story to give me my spark back and dare i say it succeeded. but now i'm wondering what you had planned for this story, if its not too much trouble could you drop me an email and let me know if you remember? and if you want to read some of the classics to see if you get your engine started i say go for to kill a kaiba (http://ygo.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600005330)viking brothers (http://ygo.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=18000) and one dance (http://ygo.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544174204).

Hoping so see a chapter or hear from you
Inigeshi

no no no no!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

you HAVE to finish!!!!

normally, i don't review with please update soon comments cause i don't really enjoy when i get them from others but oh my god, this story was so intense! you literally had me on the edge of my seat the WHOLE time.

i can't wait to find out what happens next. ahhh. i hope you finish.

btw. you win the award for one of the best lines i have ever read in a fanfic when bakura was speaking like a zombie and saying he wanted sex. i died laughing! lmao

great great great great great great work!

YAY!!!!!!!!!! YOUR BACK!!!!!! MISSED YOU!!!!!! I SHOULD KILL YOU FOR DESERTING US!!! I WAS BEGGINING TO THINK YOU WERE DEAD!!! *HUGS* UPDATE SOON....PLEASE??? *HUGS MORE* WUV YOU xxx

you... live :)

Yikes! Bakura's starting to get about as crazy as Ryou was c.c;

Oh em gee, I've missed this story so much! *huggles it* Welcome back, Schwarzwald-san! ^__^ Another awesome chapter as usual. I'm glad Ryou's getting out soon...but I thought Bakura already murdered people? o-o; Anyway, when Marik walked in on Bakura about to murder Yuugi and got all protective, I couldn't help but "Aww!" for some reason...just a protective Marik is so cute. ^__^

O.O NOOOO Ryou-kun was just right for Dartz! and Barkura was right for seto! Damn them! I say ryou should have killed that ass hole! hell them all i say! but leave Malik/Duke, and Marilk/Yugi they can live! Dude thats sad that the Mailk, who is a ho, and Malirk.. who is somthing aren't cheatting!. But the two rich guys are! O.O


Anyway.. i;m done.. Y.Y please say Ryou don't go to jail! he;d get raped as soon as as he walk in the doors! Ryou and Dartz 4life Y.Y* gose off to cry*

I'M BACK! *dance* I had to go away but came on here when I got home to see what you'd been up too. Dartz has dropped the charges, YAY. Still slightly curious about how well Dartz and Seto are going to last. How did they really get together anyway? But oh dear, I'm just glad to find out that Ryou will be ok but what trouble has Bakura got himself into? *Worried face*

*dies with laughter* Ah, I can always trust Yugi and Marik to cheer me up. Love them!

Thanks for a great read as ever.
Love Velvetina