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for Smoke & Spirit

by YamiRynEnjeru

person TweektheTwitch
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...I love you, I love you and you're stories..and yeah..totally awesome!!!^^
person LadyGrey
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww... I was a little confused since you kept refering to Marik as 'younger' at first, though I understood as I read futher... and then I admit, I got scared with the child scene, wondering if he was that age for the whole thing... but all in all, this was really well done and I'm going to go check out what else you've written. Thanks! Ja! ~LG
person Kitteh
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mwah! *giggles* Ryn-chan, you are very weird...but brilliant no less!! I liked this very much. ^^ Even if Marik seemed a bit demented...and Yami a bit cruel...(I like that, rawr X3) Seems the Pharaoh has raised himself a little pleasure slave, huh! =D I want one like that too...


~Kitteh
person Nubi-chan
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SQUEE!!! Pharaoh-pretty's Usi tis uber kewt. I'm so gonna find the pic u drew of this. Great job Ryn-chan ^__^
person Dragon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOH Dark Yami! me like! I've always found Dark Yami drool worthy. And what a great way to start the morning off by reading one of your fics!