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Interesting!! I hope you'll continue with this (I was already afraid that you wouldn't)! Really, I can't wait to see what happens next...
Anyway, the idea of this story is very original - that Amane is alive and Ryou has some painful past and doesn't remember almost anything...I think he needs Bakura to show him what real love is. And it was cute how Bakura was all shocked when he saw Ryou for the first time ^_^
Please, keep up the good work, it's worth it!

I really like this story! It is fresh and original... I am really intrigued as to what happened to Ryou to have caused his death and how his sister was able to bring him back. The story flows well and is well described - the colorful commentary is delightful! Bakura is his typical gruff self but seems to already have a major soft spot for 'his' Ryou... Ryou obviously is already feeling an attraction - it is cute how he blushes and gets all embarrassed when Bakura shows him affection. Nice job and please continue! It would be a shame if you didn't...

Very very very well written (English is your second language, isn't it?) and I can't wait for you to continue!

I'm a bit confused about that last part and how England (sp?) came into the story. Ryou does have any ties to Europe. He's 100% Japanese.

I really love your story. please continue with it. update soon

thanks :)

this is a great start for a fic, i cant wait to see what happens next! i felt that the beginning was a bit rushed, but its well written and it left me wanting more. update soon!