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Ahhhh, Marik??!! -hides Ryou- Glad amane was good with it

I was glad that Armane didn't have a cow when she found Ryou and Bakura sleeping together and that it had been obvious that there was more to it than the two of them "just" sleeping! In fact, the way that she let both her friend and her brother find out that she knew what had gone down the previous night was rather funny! You managed to capture a very insecure and timid Ryou... embarrassed by his sister's blatant comment about him having sex and that Ryou could not meet Bakura's eye at the table. Perhaps what was even more classic Ryou behavior was when he had questioned Bakura's reasons for spending the night. Very sad that Ryou doubts himself so much that he feels he is only worth a pity fuck... but Bakura reassured him and all is well... Ah... and now we are going to find out more about the missing few years in Ryou's life and how Marik was involved... Nice chapter!

can't wait to see what happens next. I also want to beat this "HIM" person with a bat until he dies for hurting Ryou but it's okay i'll just wait for an update instead.

Love it ^^

i love it. i can't stand the though of ryou going through so much pain. but as long as bakura is there i don't think theres anything that they can't get through. i really can't see ryou and bakura with anyone different. this a prim example of why i love tendershipping. there love it's... amazing, breath-taking, unbelieveable it sends a warm feeling up and down my spine. and this story renews that feeling thats why you have to keep it going.

Oh, my... what a wonderful chapter to find waiting for me tonight! Once again, I have to comment on your style of writing - I just love it. It has a natural flow to it that is refreshing. Giving insights into Ryou's fears and feelings as he experienced them lets us know how deeply rooted his anguish is over his past - remembering bits and pieces, wanting to remember more and yet fearful of memories - and more than likely the reason for his nightmares. And there was Bakura to hold Ryou throughout the night! Chasing away those nightmares and worries... the proverbial knight in shining armor! The love scene between the two was beautiful. When written well, as yours was, physcial play of any sort between these two is just simply delicious! I continue to love the story and crave more... more I say! ; )

Three chapters the same? with the same name! CONFUSED!! guess what? NOW I'M CONFUSED!!!

Nice chapter, lots of suspense! Seems like Ryou has some kind of trauma from his past, even though he almost doesn't remember it... It must be pretty scary to be able to recall only unsure things like pain caused by some unknown force. Well, poor Ryou...it was going so nice for him and 'Kura before he freaked out from just one sencence (though I'm not blaming him, not at all)!
And it's really interesting how considerate Bakura is, stopping exactly when Ryou tells him to ^_^ Yeah, they're still falling for each other! And the kisses were SWEET! Ryou is already feeling safe with Bakura, which is great ^_~ Really, I feel so sorry for him now...
The part with Amane visiting England was original as well, and there were some hints referring to Ryou's past... Yet, there are many questions ^_^ And I can't forget to mention father Charles, who is probably the only uncowardly priest I've seen in quite some time (and I hope he won't become one of the hypocrites)! Amane is quite cruel to herself if she thinks it was wrong of her to save her beloved brother, there had to be someone to tell her otherwise!
Well, keep going! Looking forward to the next update ^_^

PS: I don't think your grammar is bad, you don't make too many mistakes and your writing style is so good that it makes up for them eventually, so don't worry!! But if anything bothers you in this department, I can help ^_~

Ah... the intrigue continues! Bakura is being a bit more aggressive in his pursuit of Ryou. Looks like maybe Ryou has had a bad experience with someone previously? Maybe rape? Regardless... it was sweet that Bakura was understanding of Ryou's reservations about going any further than kissing and backed off when Ryou freaked. You raised more questions than gave us answers for, you big tease! Interesting bit with Armane at the church... I'll be looking back for updates to see what happens next! And, don't worry about your English, dear... you are doing well! Quite honestly, there are way too many people who claim English is their native tongue who mangle it beyond words! (Both spoken as well as written - not only grammar but also spelling...) You are doing just fine... : )

cool but I want to see more please continue