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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
umm could you use speak marks when they are talking
i get confused
i get confused
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hihi!
Great fic, I love where you are taking it, but I suggest getting someone to beta this fic. There were far too many typos.
But overall, this was good. Please update soon!
(p.s. if you need a betaer, I'd be happy to help)
Great fic, I love where you are taking it, but I suggest getting someone to beta this fic. There were far too many typos.
But overall, this was good. Please update soon!
(p.s. if you need a betaer, I'd be happy to help)