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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY plz finish soon i totally love this story
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't like it anymore... it got all crappy and confusing... like a 10 year old made it up... i bet you're ten! *points* eww... that's like child porn... *points at ranodm child*
i liked this story... but when you 'have' to put a lemon in (that sucked, no offense or anything) to keep people reading, you know that you've lost...
i liked this story... but when you 'have' to put a lemon in (that sucked, no offense or anything) to keep people reading, you know that you've lost...
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, I don't know whether to scream, 'WTF?!' or 'I'd like to read more!'...beneath all of the childish 'I've got your nose' antics, I see some actual subplot, which is what is partly keeping me intrigued...not to say this is a flame or anything!...Just that if you fixed some of the grammatical errors, maintain character consistency, and make the scenes flow a little better, this could be a real kick-ass story!...But for now, I'll stay tuned in just for the pure entertainment!...Like how you've somewhat deepened Bakura and Ryou's relationship and the appearance of Tristan was certainly a surprise (I was wondering what happened to him!), so I hope to see some more! I'm interested to see how you'll pair the characters up, if at all...thanks! Bye! ^__^''
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This whole story is one big ball of weirdness... but it is interesting... so i will see where this goes... hope ya update soon!
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!!!! i totally luv ure story plz finish itz totally awsome
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BRILLIANT!!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yugi: Guys...THEY KNOW!
Malik: SHIT!
Ryou: now what?
Joey: we are so dead...
Malik: SHIT!
Ryou: now what?
Joey: we are so dead...
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHHH i love it....i love it!!! Seto and the Yamis are drooling, XD....i guess the Hikaris and Joey's plans are working. I really hope they get what they want *squeals* UPDATE SOON, PPPLLLEEEAASSSEEE!!!!
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahhahahahahhahahaha ph fuckin shit that's funny...bloody hilarius! ok i can't spell lol...hahahahahahahahahahahhhhahaha
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*rolls eyes* i read this on fanfiction.net. And I have to say-Ryou, no guy is worth humilrating yourself over. So get over him, and try finding someone else-preferably outside Domino, there are plenty of guys out there. Problem, all the decent guys are either taken, gay or dead. So oh well, good luck!