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for Ocean Mist

by Lechan

person smint45
schedule May 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know you worte snippletts for the haert of the ocean I just dicoverd this after reading your fantastic story again!!!! I really liked this short story!!! Now I'm off to read the second one!!!! Thanks a lot for posting this!!!!
person LonelyDove89
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your stories are so beautifully written. I just started reading them a little while ago and i cant wait for you to come out with more. ^_^
person Eternal Nightshade
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! *Bawls * I loved it...! *sniffle sniffle *
person LY37
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this epilogue. I look forward to the other epilogues you mentioned you will write. Please, can you focus more on Yami's and Yugi's life and love life? You definitely a great writier. Your Number One Fan!!!
person dip
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*snifle* mannn, tis poetic sadness ={ lol! I liked it, but in a way, it felt kinda vague almost a little rushed like, it would have been nice to see some more ways that yugi influenced her. also for how young she was, she seemed alittle 'too' mature almost. Then again, it may just be the fact that i'm use to reading fics where anzu's portraied a bit on the ditzy side -_= but as for the point it was very much understood =3
person Dara
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story, I like that little pice. I hope that you will us tell that Yugi and Yami can meka\e human love and please send me songs from "Memories" and thise new from that story. I can't wait wen will you post next story or next chapter from "Mou hitori" or... oki you know what we all want.
person Yami Yuugi
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh yay more that goes to "Heart of the Ocean" That's probably my favorite of your stories at the moment. I really liked how you had Yuugi influence Anzu in this, and the whole scene with her watching Yuugi and Atemu. The point had crossed to me, and I hope to read more of the snippets. As usual I would like to hear the song that goes with this fic. I am already addicted to the other two that you sent me.
person inuyasha nut
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
me like!!!!
pls hurry wiv da nxt 1!!!!
pls!!!!