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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A few mistakes here and there but the overall story was hot. I hope you can write more Marik/Seto.^^
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Akefia: *waves "long review alert" flag*
BI: I think this fic was better, there seemed to have been an easier-to-follow plotline.
Muse: You just like it better because there's smut.
BI: -_-* Stuff it you. I can't believe Ryou is still trying, really, get a clue darling. I feel much better now than I did when I read the first fic. It got better with some sleep, I wanted to read this, but the naggy voice in the back of my mind wouldn't let me, had to finish that essay. Of course, I'm reading this when I should be doing my report. I got to stop doing this.
Muse: You JUST figured that out!?
BI: -_-**
-please stand by-
BI: OK, anyway, Seto was definatley chibi-tized in this fic. Not that it's a bad thing; he was very cutesy, especially with that "loud uke" thing. He was a lot different from his normal seme self.
Seto: ...This descusion is desturbing me...
BI: Then don't listen.
Seto: I'm a figment of your imagination, how can I not listen?
BI: Well...you're actually a figment of someone else's imagination, so it's not my fault you hear.
Seto: ...-_-...OO! Oh, hey! I just realized that Black Ice's initials spell "bi."
BI and muse: ...-_-...
BI: Uh, yeah, Seto, we all noticed that a long time ago.
Muse: Gawd, you really are slow aren't you?
Seto: Erk...well...I'm not THAT slow!
Akefia: Yes, you are, Ice Chibi.
Seto: ><* You little...
Muse: *steps between them* That's enough! Wrap this up, BI, we're getting way of topic.
BI: Right, anyway, thanks for the (TWO ^.^) Marik/Seto fics! I really enjoyed seeing more of that pairing. There actually aren't that many fics with Marik/Seto, or Seto/Bakura either and I love those couples (Seto/Bakura is my number one and I like Marik with Yugi.) There are too many hikari/yami and Bakura/Malik (although that pairing can be good.) However, I do like it best when Seto is seme, except for in those fics where Seto still truely does not believe in magic and Marik's more evil-ish. Now I have to go clear up a situation with Ice Chibi and Ake'chan and finish my report.
Seto and Akefia: OO* WHAT DID YOU JUST CALL ME!?
BI: I think this fic was better, there seemed to have been an easier-to-follow plotline.
Muse: You just like it better because there's smut.
BI: -_-* Stuff it you. I can't believe Ryou is still trying, really, get a clue darling. I feel much better now than I did when I read the first fic. It got better with some sleep, I wanted to read this, but the naggy voice in the back of my mind wouldn't let me, had to finish that essay. Of course, I'm reading this when I should be doing my report. I got to stop doing this.
Muse: You JUST figured that out!?
BI: -_-**
-please stand by-
BI: OK, anyway, Seto was definatley chibi-tized in this fic. Not that it's a bad thing; he was very cutesy, especially with that "loud uke" thing. He was a lot different from his normal seme self.
Seto: ...This descusion is desturbing me...
BI: Then don't listen.
Seto: I'm a figment of your imagination, how can I not listen?
BI: Well...you're actually a figment of someone else's imagination, so it's not my fault you hear.
Seto: ...-_-...OO! Oh, hey! I just realized that Black Ice's initials spell "bi."
BI and muse: ...-_-...
BI: Uh, yeah, Seto, we all noticed that a long time ago.
Muse: Gawd, you really are slow aren't you?
Seto: Erk...well...I'm not THAT slow!
Akefia: Yes, you are, Ice Chibi.
Seto: ><* You little...
Muse: *steps between them* That's enough! Wrap this up, BI, we're getting way of topic.
BI: Right, anyway, thanks for the (TWO ^.^) Marik/Seto fics! I really enjoyed seeing more of that pairing. There actually aren't that many fics with Marik/Seto, or Seto/Bakura either and I love those couples (Seto/Bakura is my number one and I like Marik with Yugi.) There are too many hikari/yami and Bakura/Malik (although that pairing can be good.) However, I do like it best when Seto is seme, except for in those fics where Seto still truely does not believe in magic and Marik's more evil-ish. Now I have to go clear up a situation with Ice Chibi and Ake'chan and finish my report.
Seto and Akefia: OO* WHAT DID YOU JUST CALL ME!?
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BI: I just looked and found my review was too long, so it got cut off. I put the blame on these two! *glares at Seto and Akefia*
Seto and Akefia: WHAT DID WE DO!?
Muse: *filing nails* You got completely off-topic.
Seto and Akefia: *silent rage*
BI: To repeat the IMPORTANT part of the review that got cut off (in basic overview): I think Seto is better as seme in Marik/Seto fics except when it takes place in the time the series took place and Marik is still evil-ish.
Marik: -_- 'Evil-ish?'
Muse: *blows on nails, then stands up* Alright, let's go. *hustles boys to door* BI and I have a report to write and I want all of you to write 'I won't get so off-topic in reviews' four hundred times.
All boys: OO WHAAAT!?
Muse: *death glare*
All boys: *thinks: 'demon!', and runs out door*
BI: Can't believe my review was cut off, if it's going to be cut off, how am I able to type so much!? ><*
Seto and Akefia: WHAT DID WE DO!?
Muse: *filing nails* You got completely off-topic.
Seto and Akefia: *silent rage*
BI: To repeat the IMPORTANT part of the review that got cut off (in basic overview): I think Seto is better as seme in Marik/Seto fics except when it takes place in the time the series took place and Marik is still evil-ish.
Marik: -_- 'Evil-ish?'
Muse: *blows on nails, then stands up* Alright, let's go. *hustles boys to door* BI and I have a report to write and I want all of you to write 'I won't get so off-topic in reviews' four hundred times.
All boys: OO WHAAAT!?
Muse: *death glare*
All boys: *thinks: 'demon!', and runs out door*
BI: Can't believe my review was cut off, if it's going to be cut off, how am I able to type so much!? ><*
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OO I like this one too are you going to do another one?
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was cute, but poor Ryou! I feel bad for him, since he seems to really like Seto, and he obviously would be so sweet to him - or anyone, I guess - in a relationship, unlike Marik who's basically just a jerk, even if he is hot. *sigh* I guess I just hate for any of the charries to have to suffer. He and Yami would be a good couple, though - weren't they friends in the prequel to this? Oh please, please, write one more oneshot in this ficverse about Yami and Ryou! Please?
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty damn hot =D