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for We Gonna Do This?

by Kugatsu

person Black Ice
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I...want...that shirt!!! It sounds like such a hot shirt (it'd be even beeter if it came complete with Seto!) ^^ Yay! I'm so happy I got a Seto and Marik fic. Seto as a chibi... *squeals* Way too cute, I've never imagined him like that before. And the thong! OO Thinking bad thoughts rigth now! ^^

The fic in-and-of itself was a little iffy, it was kind of confusing to figure out everyone's relationships to each other. Eventually I got it, although I still couldn't figure out how old you were trying to make Pegasus (by the way, what happened to him? He disapeared.)

One more thing, you think YOU'RE tired!? I tried a new sleeping pill last night (I have trouble getting to sleep) and not only am I tired, but I'm also incredibly weak. It's taking a lot of effort to write this review and I'm supposed to be writing an essay now! If it weren't for the fact that I'm reading your stuff, I'd be in my bed!

Oh, well, you gotta take the bad with the good, right? I am sooo not taking that pill again...
person Black Ice
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
P.S. I REALLY loved Yugi and Ryou in this fic. Drunken, sluty chibis! *laugh* Ooh...XX...REALLY need to stop typing now...bed...
person Wicabeth
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*snerk* I liked this actually XD
person paranoidcharlotte
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this! Can you do a sequel? Why aren't you continuing like crushed velvet I liked that too :(
person Velvetina
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was freaking amazing. I love every single moment of it. Woot for slutty Yugi and drunken Ryou twas awesome. My fave bit was where the chibis picked Seto up and pursuaded (forced) him to get ready and go to the club. I can just see this look of horror cross Seto's face as he realises there is no escape.

Oh My god. Marik was so so so...SO hot. Droolworthy, shagworth...whatever that boy was he was just...worthy...wow. I want pne lol.

Hehe Bakura and Malik were funny and apparently very attached to each other.

Love it. Velvetina