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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Would've made a nice fic but drabbles are always good too. You should have a beta reader, though. Someone to correct the errors. hehe, I'm up for the job if you'd like, simply email me (angelicdevilryoko_16@hotmail.com)
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
iie iie it is a good start, this is not a flame nor yelling, it is advice. you need to leangthen your chapters and try to always make a slong first chapter, because it is the first read and needs to capture the readers attention, and u need just a little more detail into your chapters other than that its an interesting start, i hope u ad more so i can seee where this story leads