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for Chocolate Rain

by EgyptianStar

person Anon
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plzplz continue soon
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CUTE!!

MiM
xXx
person Nekosune
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Cookies and pocky for you! I can't wait for Yami to pay Yugi back! *smirks* Oh, the wonderful smuttyness I see in the future! Well, if you update soon, I'll give you yamyams! ^_^
person Sarah Costa
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting game that Yami and Yugi are playing...I can't wait to see the next chapter. Please update as soon as you can. ja ne
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Marik: Stupid Pharaoh

Yugi: Where did you come from?

Bakura: Baka Pharoah

Yugi: Will you please stop insulting my lover!

Yami: Lover Yugi? *raises eyebrow*

Yugi: Don't you want me to be?

Yami: Yes Kisses

I love this story It's great so far!

MiM
xXx
person Cherazz
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yummy...this is going to be excellent =D Great idea hun;) I know what I'll be thinking about all night ^.^