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My email is sworddragon_yingyang(at)myway.com Thanks again.

hallo!!! ^^' i love the stroy line! its great actually. you jsut need a beta! im waitign for the next chappie...^^' on my toes dancing with waiting....T.T
hahaha...keep up the good work love!

woah!!! why would your ratings go down? i love this story!!!!! can't wait to find out seto's plan to save jou!

Well I like this story... and as for the rating... it's most likely someone who doesn't like it rating it 0 over and over again...

I don't think your rating should go down! I think it's just a few spelling mistakes and grammar notes that people are picking up on. Please send your story to me and I'll be quite happy to check it through. Keep it up please!!! (Have some more cake)!!

great story!!!! keep up the good work!!! i wanna know what happens next!!:O):O):O)
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Hey! Nice story! Yes you should absolutely ignore the ratings. They aren't reliable at all to judge a story, neither is the review count I've discovered. However there are many many typos and grammer mistakes and spelling errors. Do you have a Beta yet? Or a friend to preread them at home? If you do you might want to change to someone else since too many are slipping through at the moment. If you don't have anyone, there are forums at mediaminer and a catagory here I belive to find one. I'm also available if you ever need someone to preread something last minute or long term. The spelling errors are probably what's bugging most people because to some/most it's distracting and makes the writing seem of less than high quality. This story though it has a way to often used plot is well written and can easily be fixed up with a few proof reads and a Beta. But fixing them is a must since it is a large problem that is completely correctable and it won't make you go out of your way to much. On the plus side many great writers couldn't spell 'author' to save their life and it has nothing to do with your creativity or overall talent.
Remember to fix the problems and update soon! It really is a wonderful story that I would like to see continued.

Thank You.
DK ;)

dude dont listen to ppl. your fic rox. i love it. could be better if you kill off jous dad.

I don't complain! I just saw your fic today and I won't leave until I know how the story ended.

WHAAAAA! don't quit! I love this story! Please keep on writing!