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for My Blue Eyed Dragon In White Armor

by tash1021

person SMercury
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is good, I like how its coming. I don't mind Seto being OOC but what irks me is the misspelling of his last name. (It's spelt Kaiba not Kiaba) I'm not trying to be rude but every time i see it, i just get annoyed. I'm not saying this to pick on you, might not have noticed it or didn't know how to spell his last name correctly (trust me I've been in the same boat) but I wanted to let you know that's my only complaint. You've done a good job so far and I can't wait to read what happens next. Ja Ne!
person bob
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep going!!!!
person jade
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHH! this story is great, its amazing how detailed your being with everything, im glad you paired noah and mokuba, they'd make a good couple^.^ and seto...-snicker fit-talking in his sleep?-lmao- please please update soon!!
person YURI
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEY I JUST READ UR FIC AND I LOVE IT .... IT'S VERY SAD BUT I KNOW THERE WILL BE A GOOD ENDING (their better be ^.^) I DON'T UNDERSTAND Y PPL WOULD COMPLAIN BUT THATS LIFE PLEASE CONTINE UR STORY SO I CAN READ IT XP BY THE WAY U MAY WANT TO USE SPELL CHECK SOME PHRASES WERE OUT OF ORDER AND SOME WORDS SPELT WRONG.... NO BIGGY I SUX AT SPELLING TRUST U ME..... YEA JUST SOMETHING THAT U CAN IMPROVE ON BESIDES THATS BASICLY WAT U ASKED FOR IN THE "NOTE" CHAPTER OKIE DOKI THEN GOOD LUCK ..... AND HURRY HURRY HURRY WITH THE UPDATE .... I'LL BE WAITING ^.~
person mara
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
write more please!!!!!1
person K.C
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!! I don't know why your rateings are going down but they shouldnt be this story rocks plz keep going!
person Cake
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ver. good story so far. I like Rescuer!Seto stories. I don't have any idea how ratings are determined, I don't think the readers have anything to do with it, really. If you've reviewed stories before you've noticed that rating the story isn't an option. I don't even really know what ratings mean, I've seen stories that were utter crap with high ratings. Chill, ignore it, and please keep writing! Your story is well written and interesting, go with that.
person Indo
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love it! I have been awaiting an update for a while now. Hope you write more. Sorry your ratings keep on going down, hopw they rise again! ^^
person BlueRing
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhh I loved that story!! Don't stop there!!! Great job on everything. ^__^
person sum1
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic is absolutely awesome! Jou and Seto are the best couple ever. Your ratings are going down?! I'd never believe it reading your work...it's brilliant and I can't wait for the next chapter! If it's not too much trouble, could you also send me an email when you update so i can find the fic again quicker...at least until i join anyway...THANKS!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update SOON!