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for My Blue Eyed Dragon In White Armor

by tash1021

person jess<3setoxjou
schedule May 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think this is a great story so far and you should definately continue. it doesn't matter what your ratings are because chances are there are plenty of people that enjoyed reading your story but didn't rate or comment on it. i hope u decide to finish this story.
person Velvetina
schedule April 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey sweetie,

Sorry I haven't been around for a while but what can I say...reality bites?! Lol. Anyway I'm still loving the story, *sniffs* Poor, poor Jou.

Ooh I also just wanted to say if you are still looking for a beta reader I'm offering up my services...it may take me a little while to finish it as I want to do my best and unfortunatly life sucks but I will keep in touch to let you know how I'm doing. *Hug* Anyway If you are interested my email is Kittenbelle@hotmail.com...just drop me a line if you want!

Cuddles,
Velvetina x
person yourdarkangel
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i dont have any compliants i have NO idea if i spelled that right..but i love your story its got me hanging on the end of my seat! please write more! and SOON!!!
person Dragon Kiana
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Seto is going to save Jou from his hell *doing the happy dance* Please, please, you must update soon. BTW whats Seto going to do? Something very, very, very evil to Jou's dad right?
person Sully
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i want another chapter :(
i love this story
person >insertwittynamehere<
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. It's truely awsome, but just so you know you have a lot of grammer and spelling mistakes. For one it's spelled "Kaiba". Anyway keep up the good work.
person Shell
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far this is a good story. Sad about Jou but glad that it is getting better. Can't wait to read more.
person Anon
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think its great. Keep at it. I really want 2 know what Seto has planned and how it ends. So please please please please continue!!!!
person dustbunni
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey!!!!!!!!!!!! wheres the rest!?!?!
i love it. its so sad but so good. wheres the rest of it!?!
person sassike
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's sooooooooooooooo COOL I love it update update update