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for My Blue Eyed Dragon In White Armor

by tash1021

person LadyVirgo91656
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I hope you update soon.
person ChibiRinni (2 lazy 2 log n an such)
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story iz getting better n better! I really can't wait for more. I hope jou gets 2 see his Dragon soon! It was wrong 2 have his friend's stop him. And how did it all get on the news? How did that happen? Wouldn't Kaiba of wanted to keep it all secret? Well, great story ne way. Update ASAP PLEASE!! BYEE!!

~ChibiRinni ^.~
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seto: *whispers* Jou... I love you

Marik and Bakura: Since when have we ever been friends with the Phroah?

Atemu: Since I became your bitch

Marik: What the Hell?

Bakura: What the Fuck?

Yugi: YAMI!!! I HATE YOU...YOU...YOU!! YOU CHEATER!!

Atemu: Yugi...its not like that!! *runs after Yugi*

Marik: Whatever

Bakura: Kiss me!

Marik: You bet! *kiss*


(...Meanwhile somewhere in a closest...)


Otogi: *moans* I love you Honda

Honda: *gasps* Unnn Yeaaaaa!


(...back in the hospital wing...)


Jou: *whispers* My Dragon...


(...In a computer lab...)


Me: O.o!! Ok let's see, I want you to update because It rocked and it needs lemons, if ya know what I mean XD!!
person Cj
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story gets major love. I hope you keep on putting up more chapters.
person CT
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. I hope that the next chapter comes out soon.
How will Seto reveal himself to Jou without getting him angry?
When will Jou get out of the hospital? and Will everyone find out that
has been taking care of Jou? Atem better be careful that Seto doesn't
find out that he was listenig in on his conversation with the doctor.
person ayachan
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that's soo cute X3 what a great chapter! keep up the good work
person Velvetina
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay update!!! Loved it so much, it was such a sweet chapter. Though poor Seto still has a bit of angst as does Jou, but I can see the happy ending still on track so I'm ok with a bit of angst. *laugh* I cannot wait to see what will happen next!
person Nefalim
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you *finally* posted another chapter;)
It feels like the... style?... has changed but I still like it even if you don't:P
Keep up the good work.
person Velvetina
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww thats so sad...and cute. Bless Seto he's a little late but he's doing the right thing, he's such a cute guy! I hope to see an update soon!

Velvetina
person smalvina
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story
Please update soon