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Well, Sugar, much as I normally perfer SetoXYami, you make a compelling story here. Hoping you'll continue it soon, I wanna see the asshole get what he deserves.

If you up date the this is where I can be reached. sakurachino200 @ yahoo dot com

YAY!!! GO BAKURA, GO SETO!!!
*does happy dance*

Bakura: Coffee?

Marik: *nods*

*Bakura reads over shoulder* Oh HELL NO!!! Ponytail? Suit!? I'd rather kiss the Pharoah

*smirk* That could be arranged

Marik: DON'T YOU DARE HE'S MINE!!!

I would never...

*Bakura and Marik both give suspicious looks*

I'm just going to err...speak to my..err..Daddy...yea..okbye *runs off*

Marik: I think she's up to something

Bakura: No DUH!!

*Speaks to Author over tea/coffee and Cookies*

Hello could you make Bakura kiss Yami? it's just that...It would be slightly amusing...

Author: Who are you? and what the hell are you doing in my room? Wait...you're not the copyright director are you? *sqeaks and hides*

Um...no...just Hell's Underworld Lord Of Darkness...with my trusty dagger Mr. Sharp and Pointy...

Author: Okaay...

Please Miss Author I won't kill you if you do...

Author: No...but Bakura might...

*grin* I will make sure that won't happen besides...I'll make Marik cut his sex off

Author:..............I'll think about it!

YAY!!!! *hugs* THANK YOU!!

Author:......................

asomeness i loved it his father was a fucking ass bastard 4 hurting jou-chan and go bakura! dude he would make a asome lywoer and yah they were so much like faimly and i love how mokuba was a perverted sneeky little kid lol and jou and seto belong 2gether oh i loved ur fic and keep on going some people may not like it but thats there problem great fic and keep it up^_^

Loved it. Jounochi Senior is in for a big surprise when he gets to prision. Talk about getting gang banged he sure as hell will. Seto came through for him. Now I'm happy. update soon. Hope the epilouge has some Jou/Seto action.

Bakura??????
Bakura?????
Lol
I can't believe it

Wow! this story is getting interesting. Isnt his father supposed to be awaiting trial for the child prosituting charges though?

Bakura better rip Jou's Dad a new one or so help me!!! **internal scream of rage** ^.^;; ok, well.... please update soon! ^_^ It's getting really good so, hope to see a new chappy soon. Till then, byee!!

~ChibiRinni ^.^

*grins manically*

Hey Marik, Bakura, this author has turned 'Kura into the Phroah's best Friend and Oh yea...he's a lawyer how do you feel Bakura baby?

Marik: Three letters: W. T. F!!??

Bakura: the only time i'd ever become Pharoah's best friend would be when he's six feet under pushing up daisy's!!

*laughs* THAT'S MEAN!! Funny nonetheless, yet mean...

Bakura: *bows* Love you too xx

OoooOOoo that's creepy Don't ever do that again...

Bakura: *laughs*

Marik: ..........

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Bakura: .........

A perfect job for a thief. A shark. HaaHaaHaa. Oh this is too good. Where's Seto. I'm hoping he's trying to help his puppy. Update soon.

wheres the rest!?!?!?!
i like this story, its good
keep updating, plz.