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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jou: Seto Please? *whispers* Save me
Yugi: What was that Jou?
Bakura: *sings loudly* SOMEONE FANCES THE CEO, SOMEONE FANCES THE.....MMMMMMM...Marik
Marik: Shut and kiss me fool!
Yami: *rolls eyes* Not in front of Yugi!
OK Where did that come from? still never mind...Your story is good
Yugi: What was that Jou?
Bakura: *sings loudly* SOMEONE FANCES THE CEO, SOMEONE FANCES THE.....MMMMMMM...Marik
Marik: Shut and kiss me fool!
Yami: *rolls eyes* Not in front of Yugi!
OK Where did that come from? still never mind...Your story is good
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww so angsty. But I'm liking it lots. I really want to see the next chapter of this as I reckon its got great potential!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really well written! Jou is such a good character and you've managed to keep his personality realistic whilst brining out another side to him. *FuzzyBunny hands you some cake* please update soon!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooohh i hope kaiba rescues poor jou from his nasty father. I like your plot and idea, the only improvement I can think of is to find a beta, they can help you catch those pesky spelling mistakes!