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OOOoooohhhh~~!!!! More more!! very good!! I love it! I wanna know what is gonna happen!!

excellent story you've started a few spelling mistakes but thats okay it good keep up the great work

Aww the happy ending is all that matters. Ooh i so wanna see what happes during the performance!!!!! but poor jou, though i'm sure our darling set will help.

And you stopped because!? That's what I though when I was done with the first chappy. Your are evil, I want to know how it goes on, especially after that line saying there will be a happy end. Jou really deserves a happy end, poor darling...although I must admit that Jou on a leash is kinda kinky. (Gee, I read too much "In the Doghouse") Anyway, please update soon, I can't wait for the next chappy^_^

Mokuba: mmmm...Noah!

Yami: Ahem!!

Yugi: Atem? where!!

Yami: *shakes head* no, Ahem! *pionts to Mokuba and Naoh!*

Noah: OMG...MOKIE!!

Bakura: what is...WTF???

Ryou: MY EYES!!! MY INNOCENT NON-PERVERTED EYES!!!

Bakura: THEIR NOT THAT INNOCENT!!

Marik: yeah, as I recall you were licking Bakura's cock and gasping with eyes wide open...

Ryou: yes well...*blush*

Otogi: Oh HONDAAA!!

everyone: *sweatdrops*

Yami: that's cute

Malik: only you would say that Pharoah!

Marik: *hi fives Malik* GO BABY!!

Anzu: FRIEND-

Bakura: -SHIT! *decides not to lick knife*

Marik: why are you wasting blood?

Bakura: *rolls eyes* because..it's Anzu's and she's minging!!

Marik: point taken...

ok that was bloody strange update soon

MiM
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ITS AWESOME!! oh, and i loove the pairings!!!

And another great chapter^_^ The twist with Mokuba and Noah is so nice...I have a thing for Kaiba-cest one way or the other^_^ Good thing Seto will be at Jou's performance, can't wait to see it.
About a beta, I would be willing to help you out, although I am not a native speaker; I study to become a translator for English though and my lecturers generally don't complain about my writing and translating skills.

Good story so far, interesting plot! I'd be willing to be your beta if you want. E-mail me at kristaheigl@yahoo.com

(can't be bothered to sign in). Again a good chapter! I can picture Fifi in my head perfectly and I already want to strangle her. No sweat about studying, I know how you feel! One of my dissitations needs to be handed in next week! ~_~ I don't like working! I can't wait till you update, and seeing as you liked the cake so much, have some more, it's chocolate!!

i love your fic its great. hope you keep writing.