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for My Blue Eyed Dragon In White Armor

by tash1021

person Mo-Kitty
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If you fix the format, u will be alright. That's the only problem I see.
person InHuman Lover
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so i dont knw why ppl are complaining
person Krista
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was just browsing the site and I saw that your story had been updated, (I haven't been on this site since, well, probably not since I last posted to you). I also saw that you said that you had sent chapters to me to look at. I really don't think that I ever got any e-mails from you, unless I thought it was spam and accidentally deleted it (I've been getting tons of random spam lately). Really, really sorry about that, if that is what happened! If you want to try again with future chapters, maybe you could put the story name and your name in the subject, that way I wouldn't delete it as spam. I usually check that e-mail daily, so I'll let you know as soon as I get anything from you, so that way you'll know if it's getting through or not right away. So anyway, just letting you know the offer still stands if you want to try again, if not, that's cool too.
person Anon
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!!! Jou is gonna get saved. This story is excellent, please update .... pretty please.
person Sola Asura
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update sooon. The story is really good and I want to read more of the story.
person Velvetina
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey sweetie. Its great to see an update, I was starting to wonder. Normally I would love to beta for ya but I am soooo swamped at the moment it would take me about a month to get back to ya, however if ya still need someone in a months time mention it and I should be avalible.

I loved the chapter. Yay Jou is gonna get help, go Seto, go Seto!!!
person Nekosune
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Extra yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! Ignore anyone that rates you low, they're just jelous! (and being an ass) ^_^ Update soon for more yamyams!
person Hikari Raine
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is great. I can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you update soon

Ja

PS, dont let the star rating bother you if there really is something wrong with the story then they should say something in the review. it's probably someone with too much time on their hands anyway.
person JouKami
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dude that was great. O.O sept for joeys dad being a dick. KILL HIM, SETO.
person JouKami
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* why havint you updated. i really like your story. its one of many i keep track of. but noones updating. and your storys the best one on here. please up date soon. \m(-.-)\m/