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for My Blue Eyed Dragon In White Armor

by tash1021

person lollilov
schedule August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That is the most beautiful story I have ever read.
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
We would like to say that this is a great story thus far. Sad and angsty, I hope seto can help joey!
person kagomegirl
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh this was wonderful!! i love the way seto rescued his pup and the way jou refered to seto as his beloved dragon. so kawaii!! ooh and i am so glad you had them able to get pregnant!! they all deserve to have love-children of their own. ^_^
person smalvina
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice ending
thank you for the story
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww cute Epilouge I hate MPEG usually but that was cool

Marik: *mutters something about hating children*

Freddie: *grins evilly*

Bakura: Oh no....

Er...Freddie I don't think thats a good idea

Freddie: *Pouts*

That's just creppy

Bakura: Hn. I agree

Marik: *nods*

Okay.....I'm off to bed night boys
person LadyVirgo91656
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the ending. It was a great story.
person Peace
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, what's the Kaiba kids' names?

(cute ending)

Peace Out
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heee heeee heeee That's very amusing

Bakura: I NEED TO HAVE WORDS WITH THAT AUTHOR!!!

I WANT MR.SHARP AND POINTY BACK *starts to cry*

Marik: shh...It's okay *grins* Mr.Sharp and Pointy

Mr. Sharp and Pionty: *grins proudly* MASTER!!

SHARPY!!!! *hugs*

Freddie: I shall haunt the Authors nightmares forever...

NOO!! Freddie...she may have stolen my dagger but I like her

Author: Err..Hello Mister Bakura

Bakura: That's Lord of Pain to you

Author: I um...

Bakura: Thank you...

Author: Huh?

Bakura: Don't make me reapeat myself

Author: Why?

Bakura: You never made me screw Yami so thanks...Otherwise I might have hurt you!

Author: My Pleasure?!

Bakura: *kisses on the cheek*

Author: *faints*

Wow...that was seriously unexpected





person LadyVirgo91656
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah Seto! You go get them. I hope the Judge doesn't screw this up by not allowing the evidence since it didn't come from the police. Jou deserved to be mad at Seto and Happy as well. I lovede this chapter. Update soon.
person ChibiRinni
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!! I was waiting for this story to be updated for a while. So glad to have another chapter! GO GET HIM BAKURA!! KICK HIS ASS SETO!! >] Can't wait for more! Byee!!

~ChibiRinni ^.~