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May 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Good story! I like it.
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...there probably won't be more chapters, will they...? So long no udate... T___T I desperatelly want more.. TTTT
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March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Screams, running into room and locking door behind so as not to be disturbed. I love this story! Between you and Lechan, you just made this shitty day into the best one in the past three months! Thank you so much for updating! Please continue?!!
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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aw, this is so good! Yugi is so sweet! I like the fact that you've made the pharoah bad-tempered a lot of the time because, you know, if you had to rule an entire country and live up to a God, you'd be pretty stressed too. The parrallel world thing is a little confusing, given it's sort of Egypt, but sort of not Egypt. Grammer and tenses is a little off at times, but it's pretty good considering English isn't your first language, and I can translate what you mean well enough. I like the story so far, so well done and please update soon!
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, this story is just amazing. Yami and Yugi are sooo cute. I love asshole Seth too- perfectly writen. please continue soon
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please. I love that story and can't wait what will next. Please continue.
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay, you're finally back. This is one of my favorite stories. Please continue?
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, god ,please continue. This is one of my favorite stories. I just transferred over from ff.net. Please continue
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please don't forget about this story, it is one of my favorites. Please
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May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you have very good english! ^_^ i liked the yami/yugi meeting- they'll be so cute together X3, but i looooove the seto/jou master/slave thing going on.. good luck and keep up the good work