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for Colors of the Soul

by ShadowDragon

person YamiRynEnjeru
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. I'd be lying if I didn't say that I had a tear or two in my eyes while reading. Your use of words to radiate emotion still enthrall me, and the vividness of what's occurring makes it hard to believe I'm reading rather than really watching everything unfold.
Hurrah for the use of colors in deeper meaning. Yami's 'formula' about being invisible is still such a powerful statement, and wholly understandable considering everything he went through and lost. And his new speech is very thought provoking, I'm amused in a serious way.
Much love for you and the fic *hearts* I adore it and look forward to what shall come.
person YamiRynEnjeru
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear Gods, a sequel *hearts*
I still adore the previous fic, proven by the fact I've reread it several times, and now knowing that there is another to follow it makes me happy in ways I can't quite explain.
Wonderful writing. I look forward to what you will present in future chapters, more so since pschological fics are hard to come by, especially those done as well yours.
Much admiration!
~YRE