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Hello. I would like very much to thank you for inventing such a thought-provoking and imaginitive work. What I expected to find was a story, but instead I found a piece of the auther's very mind and soul, if it doesn't seem to strange to say. That is to say, it was immediately clear to me that quite a lot of thought was put into carefully weaving this story to make it capture the reader, always wanting to read more, to know what is yet to come. I find myself pausing at various intervals in the story to attempt to piece together the thoughts of each of the characters, to decipher Yami's strange code and to hypothesize of how it will affect the characters in later stories. This is, without a doubt, the most creative and remarkable piece of fan fiction I have ever read, and once again it would be my pleasure to thank you for writing it. Please continue, as I would like very much to find what happens next.
--breathless~eternity

Wow. Another excellent chapter. Yellow-white - Mokuba is Seto's hikari, the light of his heart, like Yugi was to Yami... and now Yami needs a hikari, a Light, to function. Also, I think Yami needs his whole 'family'. I think a part of him knows this and his trying to get the message across to his cousin.

I say again, I love the way the relationships are working. You're characters are wonderful and deep, and the writing is excellent.

Thank you for the update.

Interesting problem to work out. Hmmmm....Yami either feels abandonded by Yugi or that he left Yugi alone. Probably a mix of the two? You have me so hooked on this and trying to figure out what's wrong with poor Yami! I'm loving ths story so much. Thank you for updating!!

hello crimson eyed dragon-san ^_^. i read all of your stories, and i wanted to tell you how much i love them! your writing is very unique and creative. i like how you sometimes use the yugioh cast as characters but invent totally different lives for them than the ones in the manga ^-^ it is very interesting. please write another "colors" story soon! i would love to know what happens next, and i can't wait! also, please please update your other series too! (yamis guilty? why?? what is going to happen!?) lol anyway thank you again, and i can't wait to read the next enstallments! from--yuka

*hearts* Ooh, now it's getting to that point where I don't know how I'm going to manage to sit here and wait for you to update =3
Not that I wish to pressure you in any way, because the anticipation is wonderful, as are the developments that are rising.
Beautiful writing, as always, dear =D I know you'll keep up the excellent work, and I look forward to how this'll shape up in the next two chapters you have instore ^^
~YRE

(And many thanks & cookies for the reivews! *loves on* X3)

Gods, I can't get over just how well you have tapped into the minds of the characters. It's incredible. Yami's unbalance - he's missing the white..the yin part of the equation. That's what's driven him to this, hasn't it? *sighs* Ra, I have been crying off and on through this story. Thank you so much for crafting such a tale!!!

Wow. Just... wow. This is one of the best stories I have read on AFF.net in a LONG time. Your research and the amount of love and effort your putting into this story is just incredible... I love it. Even if I want to dump Jii-Chan into the Sea of Japan for abandoning Yami like that.

Kudos to you for actually using Seto and Yami's ancient relationship as a basis for this one, and not making it prideshipping... there are too many stories where they would have a sexual relationship, and that just isn't realistic under the circumstances. I would venture to say it's criminal.

Excellent stories, both of them, and I will be watching to see how this plays out in the end.

Wow! I like how your series in general and this story in particular is going. The writing and plotting are excellent. Yami speaking in colors is a twist that is most refreshing. I'm looking forward to reading more...

Oh My Gosh! *burst into tears* i forbade myself from reading the prequel to this coz it made me sooooooo sad bt now that you hav started writing this i think i will hav to read it again. This is awsume i hope u dont take to long to update as im already hanging on the edge of my seat.

Adored the chapter, as always, dear. I'm glad Yami's making progression without too much trauma following him in the process, then again, it may be too soon to tell (not that I expect one thing or another in the future, your fic has be captivated as is =D ).

I love the way Seto and Mokuba interact, you have it done very naturally without losing their characterization.
Wonderful job, I look forward to what you have instore for the next chapters ^^
*hearts & love*
~YRE