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hey I think it's pretty I totally read the thing wrong I thought that Jou would go to hong kong I'm a total dork and the guy there was worse and when I read the mokuba part before jou said those things is seto wouldn't do such a thing and I thought it was so family like it was so cute. well I hope you continue and update soon.

My day just got a little better since you updated.A singing tree that just made my day and Seto's message was just in charther.Not over musshy but sweet enough to let Joey know he cares for him.I can just see the Tristin/Duke relationship forming hear.Serenity just doesent fit with either one in my opinion.It just looks like she would look up to them as brothers or protectors more than potenitonal love intrests.Im not saying she's a cold hearted bitch but she doesent work well with either one.It also probeally has something to do with me being and avid and quiet shameless Tristin/Duke shipper.I cant belive Joey's own father got him lube.Lube of all things to give your son.It made me laugh and sicker and almost made me spit out my soda all over my computer.And your version of Deck The Halls trueally priceless.Your right about not going on about the Ryou/Bakura fics out thear.I swear I think the year 2002 was declared "lets rape Ryou sensless"year.And your actually giving Joey's father some happiness something a lot of aurthers in the YGO fandom steer away fom.I absolutly love what your doing with this story so update soon please.Wow thats pretty damm long.Hope you update soon.Bubi.

"Duke, Serenity, Tristan, OH MY!"-lol Major *GLOMPS*, love the new chapter, and what an astonishing triangle! All the other stories I've read usually have Tristan & Duke together and never really mentioned what happened to Serenity, I LOVE IT! (here's another ego trip for you) Though...you didn't answer my question, I know you want to keep everyone on the ropes, but could you PLEASE tell me if it's a character from the show, or one you made up? Anticipation's kill'n me here! I have to agree with you though, I just never really could picture Seto or Mokie without them being tops, especially with the blonde puppy. Another thing I discovered whil reading you profile....I read a bunch of your other stories!lol I loved each and everyone of them, I just have a habit of not checking the authors name. Thank you for the special consideration towards your avid readers, have regular updates really help! Anyway, I'm taking up too much space, can't wait for your next update, bye. ^_^

no way, you're gonna make me WAIT to find out who Mokuba is going out with?? *glarez* thats just mean.

That aside...very happy that you put up another chapter, and let's hope you get 10 reviews before next week!! =D

Heh, and it doesn't help that he became the guru in this fanfic. XD It's not a bad thing, but yeah...I just find it adorable. In any case, I take it the Kaiba boys LOVE to be in control. >D Oh dear, that's giving me ideas. >>; IN ANY CASE.

And I can see why it's your favorite. ~_^ And I love Jou's dad...I'm glad he's a lot better then when he hit the poor boy. >_o And I like that idea. XDDD In any case, I can't wait for the next installment. <3

Oh I am the 20th review! I am the 20th review! Next chapter gimme,gimme,gimme^^
I love the story so far theres nothing wrong with a slow build up and you would never
lose me because of it.What will happen next will Joey like Mokies new boyfriend,will dinner
catch on fire again,will christmas trees take over the world,we'll find out next time on
"Wish"^^(don't worry I'm only kinda nuts and I'm a friendly nut)
~PhoenixAlone

wow I really like how you made Mokuba into a major character here...most Seto/Jou fics are just that, and don't include a lot of the other characters. I love Mokuba, and making him 18 is just....mmmm....~^^~
Aaanyways...hope you get 10 reviews and update soon!!

I read the finished version in A dragons Lair, and i'm gonna reread it again here!! I love this story, its so cute, and Jou plays the perfect Dr Love!!!!!

Alright! You've gotten your ten reviews and now I want another chapter,lol. In case you didn't know it, I really like your story and I can't wait to read more of it, please review soon! Keep that inspiration flowing!

I don't see why not you're not one of the greats. Wait, did that even make sense? XD In any case, I loved this chapter too. Poor Mokie...Then again Mommy Joey will make things better! >>

I wonder if that guy deflowered him. XD XD;;; -shot; hugs back- :3~~~