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by WhosJeebus

person LilyChan
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah. ^_^ I see! I'm going to go read that as soon as I finish reviewing. In any case, awww Seto got jealous. XD; Would they ever get into phone sex? O_o; Somehow I can see that happening. XD;; Anyway I hope you feel better ^____^ -hugs- And update soon. ;3
person Kiawna
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ph33r me! I'm your stalker! XD! *giggles*

Aww, poor Joey. Seto doesn't trust him. XP Course, Joey overreacted too. XD;

*giggles* Joey acting as Mr. Fix-it. Awesome. *pouts* Seto better be home before christmas. I don't like seeing Joey sad. T_T

Update soon~ Now I have 3 places to stalk. XD

Ki~
person Cirquegirl999
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You rotten jerk!lol I can't believe you didn't answer the Ryou/Mokuba question, but I completely understand. Anyway, as for the whole perfect relationship between Joey&Seto, never thought fics work out correclty if they DIDN'T have a few bumps in the road, they'r just too different to not cause friction. I wonder with all this advice Joey is giving what's he doing in as a bookstore employee? I think he'd made a fortune of he became one of those love doctors that fixes relationships. Loved the new chapter, you've done it once again and I love the whole " Bakura said I was your sex slave" bit, I wonder what ancient Seth thought about that relationship or did he get a piece to? Hmmm, I wonder, who's the suprise guest for dinner?
person DevilInTraining
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay your back with a vengence! *does the happy dance* Great chapter as usueal. I never thought that Yami would feel that way about himself but now that I think about it, it really does make perfect sense. I never jumped onto the whole Yami/Tea bandwagon it's just too overdone. Isis drunk now that trueally made my day right thear. Such a classy dignified lady tottaly drunk. It makes me happy. Joey should start charging for his "sessions". It reminds me of my group of friends. I think once you become a senior all your friends sundually think your the advice master and run to you with all their problems. Well Ill drop my 2 cents in the pot and say it's Ryou for Mokuba's boyfriend but who knows.I was glad to see this was a long chapter when I read the fallout scean between Seto and Joey. I dident want to be left hanging on the whole will they make up before the chapter is done thing. At least they are happy again and all is right with the world. The Gods can kiss my ass. Such wonderful usage of the Egytpian language. *snickers* Hmm Yugi/Rebecca. Yeah I could probeally see that if Yugi could get over her childnessess. I know this isant spelled right but it is just a review. Actually this is turning into an essay so I guess I should end it. Umm great chapter wonderful chatherization and overall storyline/plot. Keep up the great work and please update soon. Se Ya! ^___^
person KeiEn
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seto's clumsy and jealous as always, ne ^_^!
I really loved the little lover's quarrel; and what about kids?
Can't wait to see who comes next to cheer Joey up, and I hope Mokuba's boyfriend will be Ryou!
Jaa ne!
KeiEn
person Cirquegirl999
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! It's Ryou isn't it? I mean Mokie said they'd fought over him being open about the relationship and Ryou said he was having the same problem. Good idea (if that is your pairing) I've never actually seen a Ryou and Mokie pairing before so I love the idea. The conversation between the two of them while baking the cake was too funny, Bakura is in killing mode!lol Though the fact that it looks like Seto won't be home is depressing, especially since Joey is working so hard on that Christmas dinner! (Maybe its a good thing, how depressed would Joey be if his food ended up poisoning the man!lol) Anyway, loved the new chapter and as always, I can't wait for the next and thank you for answering my question. If it is Ryou & Mokie, is Joey going to put 2and2 together or just be shocked when Mokuba shows up to dinner with Ryou, don't answer this question if it gives too much away. Have a great week, bye ^_^
person LilyChan
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww ;-; And it's Ryou isn't it? XDDD Ryou and Mokuba! (Talk about an odd pairing. O_O) I just hope Joey and Seto don't object to it TOO much when they see each other. XDD Argh, I'll stop annoying you. >_>;
person angle
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i still love the story. can't wait tell you update again. I am taking a guest at Mokie's boyfriend. Is it Ryou. that is my guest. please let me know if i am right. you can email me and let me know at.ladyofnite86@yahoo.com.

thanks please update soon.
person DevilInTraining
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your back again.This was a great chapter.Poor Joey since when did he sign up to be a love councouler.Not much of a chef though.Bakura/Mai never would have thought of it but it actually makes a lot of sense.They both are mostely materieal like people and are well to put it bluntly selfish.I think I may have an idea of who Mokuba's lover is but I may be wrong.Oh well Ill just keep reading and see if Im closer to the truth.Gingerbread men with dicks.That just made my day right thear.Im imangining it right now and I still think it's funny as hell.Well thats all for now please update soon.BuBi. ^__^
person dark_Angel
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ITSRYOU!! ITS RYOU!!!!!! IT IS SO RYOU!!!!

....hehe i thought it was weird when you wrote Bakura going out with Mai...so then I thought maybe Ryou is going out with Yugi and Yami is Mokuba's man?? and then...the whole thingy about ryou's story.....it's ryou rite?? it is SO ryou. *NOD*
aaaaaaaaanyways...awesome chapter again, and im reallly looking forward to next chapter with SETO~ =D