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That...was completely indescribable. It was superbly written and...I'm left speechless. Your writing always was awesome, Lechan. I applaud you.

Woooow...it took me about three hours to read it, but I did it! And I loved it! Weird because I don't usually go for mermaid-themed stories...but this worked out really well for me; A few grammatical errors, but not really enough to bother me. Such a damn...good...writer! We need more writers like you on AFF.net!

*Is speechless*

Seriously, this has got to be one of the the BEST YamixYugi stories I have ever read. It was written so beautifully, and very descriptive! *Adores the snippet one-shots of Anzu and Ryou* ^___^

Excellent, Superb, and good too! I loved it. I just got into Yaoi last month and this is by far my favorite one! It is well written. You rocked me and fulfilled my cravings for a good plot with true love! Please indulge your fans with all the follow-ups to this story - I will be waiting with anticipation.

i cnt wait 4 da nxt one shots connected 2 dis
pls pls pls pls hurry n write em n make sure dat yami n yugi r involved!!!

I loved this story and it gets better every time I read again. LOL. Can't wait to see the others stories!

oh my goood... *rubs eyes* wow... that took me a whole week to read (not that I’m complainin’' =3) and well... wow. I’ve read a few mer stories with these two but nothing like that lol! I think the whole idea on how the merpeople in this story mate, whether it was your idea or not, is so neat! And I just love how you emphasize Yugi’s strength. Something that can get lost in a lot of fics.

One thing I have to comment on is how well you write action. It's like I can picture perfectly what's going on, their reactions, the atmosphere and surroundings like a movie =3 Not to mention that the yaoi scenes are HOT as always lol >3

Oh yea! lol I died laughing at the 'fuck like a dolphin' statement and did EXACTLY what yami did and didn't realize it till I kept reading. The actions are so realistic! "This happens, naturally, you'd act like that" Nothing is 'out of place' totally in sync with what's going on, tis awesome >3

this story is defiantly my fav. Next to 'memories of shadow and light' which you refuse to continue for us starving drug addicts X_- lol! Honestly, take as long as you like, but just don't stop writing because some of us tend to get desperate ={

My vote: ROMANCE DAMMIT! *cough* erm… yea =3

OMG!!!! This story was so AWESOME!!!!!!! I started reading around noon and just got done with it at 9:08pm! You did one top notch great story.... And now my bum hurts from sitting and reading for so long. To tell you the truth, I thought it might not be good since it didn't go along with the original story line but how very wrong I was! You should totally make up some other stories to go along with it cause it would be cool to see the things that Yami and Yugi do now! And I'd also love to see some romance between Seto and Joey. Keep up the amazing work... I'll be waiting!!!! :)

wow...3 days later and ive finally managed 2 finish reading
a very addictive story dat kept me up...im sooo exhausted
great story!+

*faints* Don't tell me you really mean this is a ONE-SHOT. It took me about 15 minutes to save it on my laptop. I didn't think he would make. To much information for him at one and for my poor brain. But I gladly took the risk and after a few hours I can say I beat the "monster" you call one shot. I have to say it's one of the best works I have read and you can be really proud. Both Yami and Yugi played their characters well (how do you train them ^^) and the plot was great! *pokes her* and now back to your unfinished fics!