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That was such a wonderful story!!! I absoloutly loved it!!! The idea with meremaids and Atlantians and this whol soul posses thing was great!!! I'm really happy that Atemu found somebody to love after millenia of lonliness!!!! Thank you so much for this idea!!!

Oh my GOD, this was a long one! I'm impressed that you could write such a long one-shot XD.
It was sooo incredible! I LOVED it! :D
It's crazy how cold Atemu was.. i can't help but pity him..
And Yugi! Poor, poor Yugi.. But he was lovely ^^
Relly well-written, and the story didn't feel rushed or anything like that.
Very in-character, and beautifull.
Thank you for a wonderful fic.
Seto & Jou DEF(!!) romance ;)

wow that was truly a wonderful heartfelt read. i loved every minute of reading this wonderful story. thanks for the brilliance that is you. please keep more creations coming

**blink blink**two days of staying up when i should have been sleeping after a midnight shift and i have finally finished this amazing one shot! i send you much love and internets <3
J-chan

Holy crap... that was long... but really good ^^.To think that i only planned on reading for an hour or so, but couldn't stop reading your fic.Well thats to you i think i'm going to fail my chemistry exam that i should have been studing... oh well thats a complement for your fic not my grade point average...anyways your an amazing authur and i think you should contiune to write!^^ Good Luck

I just loved this. I hope that the Jou and Seto one will be romance. I don't know if you wrote theirs yet. Yugi was so sweet and caring through the whole thing. I 'm glad he passed the test and Yami actually learned to love.

dear gods, this wasn't a one shot, it was a novel! AWESOME! This was an incredible story and I loved every minute of it! I shall read the other ones when I get up later, but for now, BED! I love your writing style too, very creative and vivid. I look forward to reading all of your stories.

Anotehr great story,
yea, I saw oneshot and ended up taking two days to read this xD

I luved it, your a great writer! The way you depicted Atem in the begging, being somewhat evil, and turning soft after loneliness. Learning love from Yugi and trust, it was so touching i wanted to cry!

Awesome ending, although Alta was a bad guy good guy at times I still luved her <3


<333

You are my favourite author. Period. You know, I'm going to copy and paste this and save it on my computer, and then I'll come back to read your other stories. Are you working on anything new now? what is your last story? Can I call you master?
XD please, forgive my randomness.
You WILL be a novelist, just don't give up. You've got talent. A talent a lot of people wish they could have. I include myself in those, I'm so jealous right now. Jealous and in awe. How do you do it?...
I'm going to build a shrine for you in my closet now, want me to make daily offerings of cookies, or maybe something else? Oh, and can you please send me the songs you used in this fic? (even if I feel it's almost a crime to call this a simple fanfic...)
^_^U forgive me if I bothered you in any way. Now I want to write like you. I'll keep on working hard and improving my style! Thank you!!!

good story