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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but chotto matte yo means, wait up you know. Just chotto matte means wait up. The yo on the end enhances the sentence.
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh very good 0.0 she ends up in the nut house, so this thing was just all a dream, but it still turned out ugly, i like, oh shall rate this 5 stars brovo, great job ^.^
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, come on. An Alternate Ending can't be all bad. ^_^;
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey this is an awesome story im lovin the suspense. and the drama. awesome!!!!!!! xD keep up the good work!!!!!!!
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very well written torture fic. Disturbing, yet it makes you want to read on to the next chapter. I feel so sorry for Anzu. I hope all that's happening to her is just a terrible dream...
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope this is some kind of bad dream. For some reason, it can't be real.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa scray shit, this story scared the hell out me, it seemed so real almost, is there gonna be a part when she get's free, of this nightmare
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Anzu :( What else could you do to her?! And about that last statement I really don't want to know what he means by that, but then again I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My God! When does the torture end???
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now I am really interested in what Yugi is going to say to her!