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for House Of Motou

by DarkNecrofear

person Kenz
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok its coming along slowly but surely but I like it non the less.
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice one I love it
person ladywolfTerri
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter...^^... not confusing!... can't wait for another update
person kenzie
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squirm*
kawaii!!!!!!!!
person ladywolfTerri
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ummm, really good chapter but I think you mixed up the posts and stories..^^;;
person Kenz
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey keep it up though.......it sounds like ishizu(sp?)
and shaudi are like some relgious nuts and Balura and all them are the
gays condemened to burn in hell..........ironic yes why i thought of that I have no flippin clue.
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yami: THE SHIELDS,MARIK QIUICKLY!

Marik: OH HELL NO! *puts the shields up*

Ryou: I don't understand I'm scared

Malik: it's ok, calm down love

Ryou: love, NOW I REMEMBER, MALIK WHAT'S HAPPENED TO BAKURA??

Malik: The Witches got him

Ryou: SHIT!

Bakura: Ryou...

Ryou: Bakura...

Bakura: I love you

Ryou: And I love you *kisses*


person person
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweeeeeeet. That was kickass. You had better update soon, I'm about to die from cliffhanger suspence. T_T
person ladywolfTerri
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhhh Awful cliffie!!!!...^^... great job!...I hope your computer lets you update soon!!
person angle
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
still loving it. please update soon. :)