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February 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
One serious flaw in your story is chapter 7 where Ryou becomes his Egyptian self and can't remember what year it is. He says the year is 4200 BC. BC means Before Christ. If he really was from (what we call) 4200 BC, he would know it by Egyptian years and not as 4200 years before the birth of Christ.
In fact, since you never really came back to this idea of multiple Ryou timelines, I don't really see a point for that section at all.
In fact, since you never really came back to this idea of multiple Ryou timelines, I don't really see a point for that section at all.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!!!! That was great! Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! I really can't wait for the sequal! If you post it soon, I'll give you more yamyams, but for now, here's a can of Black Cherry Vanilla Coke to keep you up and help you write! (I'm actually drinking one right now, they're so GREAT!!!) I really can't wait! ^_^
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...I love it. I can't wait for the sequel. Please update soon. JA
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh, there isn't a chapter 16. When you typed the chapter numbers, there is a 15 and then it skips down to 17.... Just thought I would let you know because I have no idea what they're talking about with the moutian...
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was a very good job...^^...congrats on finishing it!!
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! NO!!!!! Ryou can't be a vamp!! He is supposed to be with Kura, Marik and Malik!!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! EXTRA yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! (glad you enjoy them so much!) I can't wait for your next update! More yamyams if you update soon!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seto: NO JOEY!!!
Yugi: HELP!!!
Ryou: AGGHHHHH!!
Yami: NO YUGI!!!
Bakura: RYOU!
Marik: MALIK!
Shadi: calm down everyone; we'll get through this, I hope...
Shit...
Yugi: HELP!!!
Ryou: AGGHHHHH!!
Yami: NO YUGI!!!
Bakura: RYOU!
Marik: MALIK!
Shadi: calm down everyone; we'll get through this, I hope...
Shit...
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! ^_^ I love Jou for a laugh, too, but he's also my favorite angst character! ^_^ More yamyams if you update soon!
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NNNOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! They can't have changed Ryou!!! That is awful!!! and poor Jou!!!!
Please update soon!!!
Please update soon!!!