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for Attempted Getaway

by TMD

person TresaKitti
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its rough, but overall good. Your style has changed slightly on this fic from your regular style, but its still good. Fix some mistakes and post it up again and see if you cant get a few more reviews. Its worth a shot.
person Scooter21
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol Ur so damn dramatic ina oneshot. But I liked. Heheh, Ryou walked n on them. Hahaha, that alwayz sux when that happenz.
person Tot
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
**snickers** Do I even have to say anything? Come now, T. Ok, I'll say this; It was good.
person kit-kit
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice i loved the lemon
person Shadow Raven
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You need to be bored more often, really. That Story was
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! I Love YYXYB! Its actally my top
favorite besides Seto Kaiba & Yami Yugi...I have a thing for
rival pairings, don't ask why. hee hee...^__^
Ja Ne! ^___^
Shadow Raven