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for Beyond The Invisible

by fyrbyrd074

person dragonlady222
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I'm glad they could enjoy each other even when one is only a spirit.
person Lady Laran
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wondeful tale. I hope you plan to expand on it in some way. I sincerely enjoyed it, especially Yami's vulnerability after his aibou returns. I can certainly see him reacting like that. You captured the scene perfectly!
person Arainaina
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was very good I can't believe Yami appear in spirit form totally naked *laughs* That was totally awesome. Anyways very good I really liked it
person SakuraNeko
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lmao! This is one of the best Yugi/Yami fics I've ever read. The detail, the plotline, the lemon, and the ending! Superb! I look forward to what you'll write next.
-SakuraNeko
person ChibiRinni
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy yum yum, deliciously (sp?) done! My complaments go to you and the pertrail of such goodness!!

~ChibiRinni ^.^
person Crazyb1tch85
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kneel and apologize slave! hahaha!!! just kidding ^^
You shouldn't apologize for anything, besides people love cruelty, angst and what else, but they are just in denial, let them be!!!
I didn't even touch it though, I don't like Kaiba getting in between my cute Yami/Yuugi pairing XD

Try not to use "/" or any kind of abreviation or acronym, after all, this is a piece of literature, not an online chat. Plus it will look way better.
I'd rather let Yuugi stay the cute little way he is ^^ but hey, everybody grows up!

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