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Lol...that was a very funny daydream Bakura had! :) hmm...must read more...but im dad..there's only one chapter left to read.. :(

oh dear, the pharaoh's coming to get him back....i really cant wait to see what happens next..the story has such a good plot line! 8D please update soon, im looking forwrad to your next chapter! take care.. 8D

It was NOT horrible, I LOVED it! now hurry and update before I accuse you of teasing and cliffies!

Well, I have to disagree... this most recent chapter was far from horrible.

I love Bakura! Obviously he is a favorite visitor of Marik's camp and yet he refers to the children who adore him as "brats" in typical Bakura fashion, masking his own adoration. Love it! I really liked your depiction of Marik as well, a hard ruler with a soft spot for his children. Malik pretty much seduced Bakura with his dance whether he knew it or not. The little interlude in the tent was rather hot and perfectly staged between Malik (bad me had typed "Ryou" first!) and Bakura. Bakura was a rather considerate lover. It was so obvious he had wanted a taste of Malik... and now that he has, it appears that he is going to have to face the consequences of his actions for having pissed off a living god. Good chapter!

ROLFAO! Poor Bakura indeed! I thought Bakura was the one with the vampire teeth not Malik. Oh well. Its a really great fic and i hope u update soon. I love the way its going and think that u have a knack for writting. Even if u don't get a lot of reviews (Which u should) i hope u update soon. I am looking forward to reading the rest. Great plot by the way.!

Homg, another review. <3
Anyways, I shall be waiting for more. Because Kura makes me giggle. *love love*
He's mine, though. *eats plushie* But I share him with you...and...uhm...Malik...and Ryou...and Marik...and...damnit...

Homg. It cut off the rest of my review. *tear*
Anyways, I was saying that I love it, like always. Kura brings giggles to my face.
But he's mine. *chews on a plushie* I don't mind sharing him with you, though...or with Ryou...or Malik...or Marik...damn it...

My darling, that was... spazztastically pretty X3

Bwuah, let me leave a proper review XD;;

-The writing style is quite nice in terms of letting the piece transition quickly, the story rolls along smoothly even when the inclination of one view switches.
-You paint a very nice picture with the sprinkling of details you put in. It doesn't take away from what is occuring, but adds to the scene very well.
-The characterizations you've set up are amusing, yet don't take away from the characters as you've made it believable and well-crafted.

-I'm highly amused that Yami/Atemu was called a brat =3 Because it's true, silly little bugger that he is.
-I'm even more amused that Malik bit Yami/Atemu XD Although I feel bad for Bakura that he was slightly paranoid by Malik's teeth, it's still fun =3

Hurrah *hearts* You are a great writer, love. You make me jealous... but I love you and simply am in awe instead =D
I'm gonna have to squeeze this fic on my list of stalkees o.o Bwuah.

*much love & adoration*
~YRE

I love the little witty comments..."It's a sob story"..."Then make me cry"...I love it, please more, Hikari, Yami needs more

Very nice story! I really like these two characters and how you have portrayed them thus far. Malik... an exotic, somewhat arrogant, spoiled brat who seems to be unaware that he is "pretty". I love Bakura and how he teased Malik upon first meeting him. Very well described over all. I liked the little dream sequence of Bakura's where he is all smug, sitting pretty on his throne, waiting to be pleasured in front of his enemy and then Malik's teeth taking care of that wanton interlude! Very funny. Loved the story and look forward to more!