rate_review Reviews

10/10

First off, I'd like to thank you for creating this and sharing it with us. I had read the 1st chapter some time ago, and hoped against all hope that I would find it again. Imagine my surprise when I found it completed.

Malik was perfect, Bakura was pretty frickin great too. It's a shame they didn't even get the night and I wondered if Marik and his family survived. I usually like fics that make poor Atem the bad guy, even though i don't really dislike him. It was a well thought out in plot and description and well written fiction tale.

Awww... *cries* That was great. *sniffle*

I like that they got to die together ^_^ Lovely.

Kuro

Oh Kitteh, that was lovely and just about the best unhappily ever after YGO fic I've read in a long, long, [if ever] while. *hearts*

I thought you'd kill off Pharaoh-Brat though, because... I just think that way. But I'm pleased, do not doubt that. And it took a while didn't it? XD But at least now I have closure since first reading this all those years ago, and I couldn't have asked for a more fitting ending.

Your handle on the most lovely parts of writing make me swoon and bubble deliciously just as alwasy, m'dear.
If you do write more of anything, I'll be sure to sniff it out and love on it.

XOX,

~YRE

nuuu I didn't want it to end! Poor Malik! Poor Bakura! But at least they are together! *huggles*

That was amazing! Horrible, -snorts-

you don't know your own talent, my friend.

I throughly enjoyed the lemon. Off to read the next chapter.

Kuro

Nice. I enjoyed the story greatly.

Kuro

I was curious if you had a beta for this? It's good, I love the plot line and where it is so far but I was wanting to offer if you'd like, to beta it for you. Just because there are some spelling mistakes. If not that's okay. Just thought I'd offer. I love it so far and can't wait to read more.

Oh, what's going to happen next?! I really like this so far..which is why im going to keep reading! :)