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for Ariana's Surprise

by Saka

person Anira_Oceanfang
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Is there going to be a sequel? Please! See my name is Araina and the characters name was very similar to my own. Please continue your writing!
person DreamPrincess
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG.....I LOVED IT...Thank you soooooooooooooooo much...*starts drooling*

High Priest Seto......High Priest Mahado....My 2 lovers....Me lovey very much...

*Tackles IceAngel to the ground*

Thank you for the ficcie...Me lovey it....And I'll always cherish it..Me print it out later...I may wanna read it again before bed time...I love the 2 High Priests...

I loved how you worded this "Feeling Seto’s seed release within her, threw Ariana over the threshold. With a cry she climaxed, tossing her head back as her fluids seeped out."

I also love how you put Oh gods yes...There are 3 egyptian gods...Slifer, Ra and Obelisk....I just loved this fic...That's all I can say...It was wonderful...Thank you so much....I loved every part about it...You are a wonderful writer...One of these days we will work on that fic together that we have planned...

This was just amazing...That's all I can say...Me lovey it....

I love High Priests Seto and Mahado.....

~*DreamPrincess*~