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by JadeRotaski

person Hirakura
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this line: 'I was too breathless to tell him what to do, but don’t ever let it be said that Juudai Yuki is not good at improvisation.' It's soo something Ryou would say.

It did weird me out that Judai was the seme...but that's just me.
person krad
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!That was great.I love Z/J fics,thu there are not many of them.:( I'm soo glad you did this!Hope you keep going!^__^

schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:/ haven't watched all of gx, so i don't know if i'd see this pairing or not... but this really works. from what i have seen judai would react similar to this... not sure about breaking in while ruyo's asleep though.

i'm giving your 4 simply cuz of that.
person sage
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was the AWESOMENESS!!!!
person Trevor
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please make more. I really like this. I wonder what Syrus will think when he finds out and sees this.
person Naye025
schedule February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like, I like! I glad I had a chance to read this!! Jaden//Zane is slowly becoming my favorite GX pairing (Kaiba//Jou will always be #1). This is well written with its turns, especially when Ryo woke up and Juudai was on top of him!! I hope you write more fics so I can read them. Even if they are one shots!! :)

Besides, I agree with you, GX will never be the regular Yu-Gi-Oh! And it's safe for me to say that I love the Kaiba cameos! *yay*

Ja!
person Trevor
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. I like this. Please keep making more.
person vixenia
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you. yugioh gx could NEVER be as good as the original. but all the same I love it anyways. I loved this story too. it twas a tiny bit out of character on ruyo's part but I liked it. hopefully you'll make more of these stories soon. T.T i hate to say it but there aren't too many good yugioh gx fanficcies. sweatdrop. hell theres not a lot of yugioh gx fanfics in the first place. anywho make another story soon...or feel my foxy wrath
person sinsoftime
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!!!!I luved it muches *yes, muches* Please write another! I luve this pairing (this one and JuudaixShou ^_^) This pairing rulx. YAY ONE-SHOTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person soad k
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ryou. :|