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for Small Two of Pieces *Revised*

by Sky

person Lyndsay-Marie
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that I found this story again! I waas worried that it was lost! Also I read your author's notes and I am glad that you added them to the story, it just makes the story all that much more personal and meaningful. I am very glad that you are feeling better :) I absolutely love the revisions you've made to the story thus far! It's great, and don't worry, that same thing happened to my stories on FF.net, and even when they didn't have any lemon or anything in them it happened. It was quite frustrating actually. I also hadn't realised that you were the same age as me...cool^^ Anyways, thanks for making my day a little (actually, a lot happier) by putting this story up for my massive enjoyment. Lovies!!

~Lyndsay-Marie
person Whitney
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!!!!!! OMFG!!!!! I REMEMBER THIS STORY FROM FF.NET!! It was my all-time favorite. I reviewed for every chapter, I loved it!! You know? A couple months ago, I spent hours on FF.NET to find this story. I remembered the name and everything! I could never find it....Now I know why: it was deleted! Heheh!

I can't believe you are bringing it back! Gaw!! I'm so happy! *jumps for joy* SToP was my frist lemon story I ever read. Now....This was like three or four years ago, and back then....I skipped like every single lemon part. I'm almost seventeen, and lemon stories don't scare me anymore! LOL!

I can hardly breathe. I'm not kidding. This is my all-time favorite story, (with so many reviews, you would never remember me....) I'm a major loyal person to you! I worship your stories!

I just want to thank you! *glomps you* I remember a lot of the scenes.... I want to say the scenes, but I don't want to give away the story. (I remember the little potion scheme for Yami and Yugi. That's all I'm gonna say!!)

Maybe I can talk to you through e-mail, or AIM..... (if I'm sounding stalker-ish, or freak-ish, just say so in the next chapter and I'll stop it!) ^^

I can't wait for the next chappie. Wonderful. Even though I know what is gonna happen, I can't wait to read it!!

Whitney
person Smiffle o' Godde
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! It's good! I read your other version too, and I can't decide which one I like better. This one seems to have more depth. Anyway, update soon, it's awsome!!! ^_^
person Kat_Tales
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am ever so glad to see this story again. I was going to leave a review yesterday, but the site decided that quit working and when I came back later it was gone. Anyway, I was looking for something to read and putting off doing my homework. Couldn't really find anything and kept thinking just one more and I'll do the paper. Half way down the page I saw the work "SToP" and frozen. I knew that name, really knew that name. Next I saw the title "Small Two of Pieces" and found I couldn't breathe! Lastly, I saw your name "SSJ Sky." I jumped for joy and did a happy dance. I just couldn't believe that you were back. I mean, you were the best. Everything I have ever read was compared to your wrote. The details, the plot, the pairing *winkwink*, everything was just perfect and very few could compare. Yeah, four odd years past since I had read your work and so it was a bit idealized in my head, but still. But this revision is very good as well. It has a more mature feeling to it. To those of us who have read this before can agree, this revision just makes it better. I am not sure if you remember me. I reviewed some what at FF.net when this was there. BluJay or Kat_Tales would have been my name. But just know, I will be reading this again and will be waiting for more.