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for Small Two of Pieces *Revised*

by Sky

schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH DUDE THAT WAS HEKKA GREAT!!! UPDATE SOOOOOOONNN!!!!
person Tweety
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you're writing again! :D I loved this story the first time around and now it'll be interesting to see what you'll decide to change! It's cleaner this time around and I think it was a good idea to take out that whole prayer thing at the beginning...... to be honest, it kind of dragged on there a little in the original. I'm glad everything in your life is settling down somewhat so keep writing please! I'll look forward to updates on this story!
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hohum... This is a good fic. *thumbs up* Do your best and good luck in life!
person ayachan
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh, i love it! i'm glad that you decided to redo this story!!! damn jou for forgetting about yugi ;_; lol.. slave slang huh? very creative ^^ can't wait until the next chapter
person catti-dono
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sends love and encouragement...great story...cannot wait for more...keep up the good work...catti
person Arainaina
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good please update again soon
person Lyndsay-Marie
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! This is still the great story I remember it being! **loves on you** You're doing a great job (as usual!!) I'm glad that things are slightly better for you now and I can tell by the way you write! You are truly a talented writer :)

~Lyndsat-Marie
person SydneyKate
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I finally found you again. I remember this story up at ff.net, it was all completed and some asshole reported you for no reason whatso ever so you lost the whole story and had no back ups... at least, that was one of them. I have been looking for your account on here for the longest time. I remember reading your ff's all the time!!! Yay!!! So you are going on my bookmark, and you will be updating this soon, right?
As for how you write and stuff, tell them if they don't like your style, to go and write their own! You rock!!!
person angle of sex
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person pyro_pixie_13
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! seriously very happy to see this story once again...i think that my might have actually squeeled when I saw the title. Anyway I would like to take the time to compliment you on your enhanced i.e. matured writing abilities and to say that I look forward to reading the rest of the revised story. Also my sympathies towards all of the nonsense that you were put through.

regards,

pixie