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for Balance

by Cho

person MsLilly
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! ^^

Uhmm... I really hope you haven't abandoned this story... That'd make me sad. T-T
Anyways, from the little there is, this seems to be a really addictive story that I'd love to see more of... Please update!!! >O<

Yeah... I just needed to say SOMETHING... Sooo, bye!

/Eli
person NG
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I'd be very interested to see where the story goes. I especially like the idea of the balancing powers.
person vampslyr
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh hell yeah! This is great, I definitely want more! I'm trying to figure out which Alba and Ater go with which pairing, but right now I just have guesses. I'm thinking Chaos/Order is Bakura/Ryou, War/Peace is Seto/Jou, Hate/Love is Marik/Malik, and Death/Life is Yami/Yugi, but I'm not sure about the last two. Shizuka the oracle, I like that a lot.
person raptor13
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it alot i want to see what happens next so please update dont make me beg! ~.~ please?
person Shinigami
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*muses* So Joey met Yugi and Ryou! So when will Malik show up? And where are the yamis? Shizuka's a seer, isn't she? Joey's obviously a Light, but why cannot he touch his mom's stuff?
person Lady Laran
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY COW!!!

This has to be a very unusual and addictive story. Definitely an odd take on the Yugioh characters and I have to say, I very much enjoyed the first chapter. So Yugi hears ghosts? I wonder what has Ryou so upset?

Please update soon! *chibi eyes*

LOVED IT!!!!!!!
person Soul to Avenge
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aiee! This is an amazing story..such detail...ahh i love it!! Please tell me you'll update soon *gives chibi eyes* don't abandon this please...good job!!

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