rate_review Reviews

Kaiba's a bastard, pure and simple. I hate what happened to Yami! Even after what he did to Yugi. He deserved punishment, but damn, turning into a addict-whore. That's a long fall for the Pharaoh of Egypt. Still, great story. Hah, Kaiba got his come-uppance and there is nothing better than the fact that Mokuba turned on him. How's that taste of betrayal, Kaiba? Very good. My only suggestion, dear, and I mean it constructively, is that it's sometimes hard to follow what character's POV we're on. Otherwise, well-written, dark, cruel, and great. Jaa!

Good story. I'm glad Yugi got his revenge. He was not as cruel as Yami and Seto were but he sure made his point.

wow. You are very much forgiven for writing 'the breaking' lol. I was a bit shocked and pissed off at that story, but this made me feel allot better. I have to point out though that allot of it was very predictable. I guessed basically the whole plot by the middle of the story but even so it was satisfying to see yugi's spirit as strong as it should be =3

I am glad you made a sequel. It was cool. :) I'm glad Yugi got free. Everytime I write, I think of the Japanese Yugi's voice speaking English with an accent. I'm sorry. Dan Green overacts and sounds bad at times.