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Evil, wicked, cruel, horrible...awesome! Oh, sometimes cruel endings are just as good as happy ones. So evil, poor Yugi! I like this a lot, I really do! I like how Yami, even though he betrayed Yugi, could not bring himself to touch the Puzzle pieces and Seto had to do it. That shows some sorrow on his part, but not enough to stop! I disagree with whoever said it was way out of character. For one, this is your story, and two, Yami does betray Yugi in the series. He allows his dark side to overcome him and uses the Oricalcos, leading to Yugi being briefly trapped in another place--whatever it was--and then his soul taken later. Whatever, it's still great. Jaa! (I seem to be realizing that I've read most of your stories and reviewed none. I am so sorry! This must have been back before I made an account for myself. Sorry!)

Poor Yugi. Seto is an evil ass and yami is a naive jerk. Good story.

Seto and yami are just too cruel.
How could they do that to poor Yugi. I hope they get what's coming to them. Good story.

I can't help but say that that was really cruel.

Oh, so angsty! There's sequels?
Hurry up and post them.
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Hi!

Really original. I liked it. I never expected Yami to betray Yugi like that.
I'd love to read the sequels; especially if it involves Yugi coming back taking revenge.

Ja ne!

Wow. Do the world a favour, and never write again.

That was cold! How could he? I feel sorry for Yugi. Now his soul will never be released.

>______<*screams in utter rage and pain then barges into the vault uses her magic to solve the puzzle again then turns him into Yamis worst nightmare come to life then together she and yugi hunt them down and make Yami and Seto real in shear pain and agony breakilng there bones and shattering and reshattering there souls and bodies again and again and again and again then revives them but the pain still dwells and will forever dwelll in those black hearts of there* huh sorry author interesting story but I will never forgive that kind of behavior those two should be made to rot in hell for that now worse then that they should be given a one way ticket to planes of hate and torment and nightmare I want to seem them writhe like the couple of worms they are this is unforgivable that back stabbing traitor how could he do that to Yugi he clearly has no heart he makes it a miracle he can love anyone bastards god dam mother fucking shit headed bastards well keep up the great work author and update soon I guess gtg now JA NE