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Hey!..just me, catti again...how about another?...this time maybe Jou and Seto?...work it girl...song by Papa Roach....

"Forever"

In the brightest hour of my darkest day
I realized what is wrong with me
Can't get over you. can't get through to you
It's been a helter-skelter romance from the start
Take these memories that are Haunting me
Of a paper man cut into shreds by his own pair of scissors
He'll never forgive her...he'll never forgive her...

Because days come and go but my feelings for you are forever
Because days come and go but my feelings for you are forever

Sitting by a fire on a lonely night
Hanging over from another good time
With another girl... little dirty girl
You should listen to this story of a life
You're my heroine-in this moment I'm lonely fulfilling my darkest dreams
All these drugs all these women
I'm never forgiven... this broken heart of mine

Because days come and go but my feelings for you are forever,
Because days come and go but my feelings for you are forever

One last kiss,
before I go
Dry your tears,
it is time to let you go

One last kiss (one last kiss)
Before I go (before I go)
Dry your tears (dry your tears)
It is Time to let you go

Because days come and go, but my feelings for you are forever
Because days come and go, but my feelings for you are forever

One last kiss (one last kiss)
Before I go (before I go)
Dry your tears (dry your tears)
It is time to let you go

One last kiss,
Before I go,
Dry your tears,
it is time to let you go,
One last kiss

Okay so Im a sucker for sad songs...but am also a sucker for happy endings so try these lyrics with Bakura and Ryo...they are an awesome duo...thank you so much....catti


Everytime We Touch lyrics

I still hear your voice, when you sleep next to me.
I still feel your touch in my dreams.(my dreams)
Forgive me my weakness, but I don't know why
Without you it's hard to survive.

'Cause everytime we touch, I get this feeling.
And everytime we kiss I swear I could fly.
Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last.
Need you by my side.
'Cause everytime we touch, I feel this static.
And everytime we kiss, I reach for the sky.
Can't you hear my heart beat slow...
I can't let you go.
Want you in my life.

Your arms are my castle, your heart is my sky.
They wipe away tears that I cry. (I cry)
The good and the bad times, we've been through them all.
You make me rise when I fall.

'Cause everytime we touch, I get this feeling.
And everytime we kiss I swear I could fly.
Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last.
Need you by my side.
'Cause everytime we touch, I feel this static.
And everytime we kiss, I reach for the sky.
Can't you hear my heart beat slow...
I can't let you go.
Want you in my life.

'Cause everytime we touch, I get this feeling.
And everytime we kiss I swear I could fly.
Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last.
Need you by my side.

Okay..so yell at me, because I come up with all of these strange lyrics and stories behind it...okay...so we have done boy on boy...heres your challenge...Tae and Yami...now you know we see and read the stories where Tae has this huge crush on Yami so what we want is to break this apart...Yami loving Yugi and Tae crying over it...get it?


"Teardrops On My Guitar"

Drew looks at me, I fake a smile so he won't see
That I want and I'm needing everything that we should be
I'll bet she's beautiful, that girl he talks about
And she's got everything that I have to live without

Drew talks to me, I laugh cause it's just so funny
That I can't even see anyone when he's with me
He says he's so in love, he's finally got it right,
I wonder if he knows he's all I think about at night

[Chorus:]

He's the reason for the teardrops on my guitar
The only thing that keeps me wishing on a wishing star
He's the song in the car I keep singing, don't know why I do

Drew walks by me, can he tell that I can't breathe?
And there he goes, so perfectly,
The kind of flawless I wish I could be
She'd better hold him tight, give him all her love
Look in those beautiful eyes and know she's lucky cause

[Repeat Chorus]

So I drive home alone, as I turn out the light
I'll put his picture down and maybe
Get some sleep tonight

He's the reason for the teardrops on my guitar
The only one who's got enough of me to break my heart
He's the song in the car I keep singing, don't know why I do
He's the time taken up, but there's never enough
And he's all that I need to fall into..

Drew looks at me, I fake a smile so he won't see.

could you do Yami and Seto? or Seto and Joey? or Seto and Yugi? either one of those with the song "Lips of an Angel"? Also make it like, really sad, don't do a death fic, but maybe get close to it, like one of them getting hurt?

-teania

That was sad...but i could see Seto being just like that.

Poor Malik is trying to be a friend through sex. He needs to stop that and just be a friend. I feel bad for all three of the lights. Kaiba I think will be another who suffers a lot.

Goodness me, I don't think I've reviewed the last three chapters. My bad. I blame school. >> The Mokuba/Bakura/Marik pairing was certainly interesting. I kind of liked the distance of it, in Mokuba's mind. Very interesting. The Yugi-as-therapist thing in the chapter after was similarly interesting, as was the kind of in-depth into the emotions that ended the relationship. And then this chapter...ah, more mindfuckery. I'd almost say that the mindfuckery was even more convoluted than in its predecessor. The ending threw me a little--Yugi just doesn't seem to have any chance at normalcy anymore. I'm not even entirely certain of what completely happened. The whole of the thing made me a little bit sad, honestly, kind of a clouded sadness that I'd imagine this incarnation of Yugi to be quite familiar with. All in all, nice work. Sorry for the late reviewing. ^^;

And yes...mindfuckery is a very fun word. I think all people should keep it in their vocabularies. >>

Re: Breakdown,Did ya haft a hide it here? Nearly missed it, for Petes sake! "Beautiful Disaster" and it's second Chapter "Breakdown' should be standing on it own, not under a general title (preferably continuing on). Anyways awesome, so far!

Poor Yugi. I wonder just what Malik did with the Millenium Rod and what happened to Bakura. I feel bad that Yugi is still so confused but happy that now he is actually loved and not mistreated like he was with Bakura. Great job.

Beautiful and Brilliant! I loved the end...and who does Yugi think Bakura cheated on him with?

And i LOVED the end!!! Brilliant!!

Loved it.

Kuro