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for A Series of Break up Fics

by EmeraldRains

schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Darn, I felt bad for Anzu. I lost where I last reviewed but I loved all the stories, just got caught up. I hope you can find another job. Good Luck.
person Rella
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm just glad to see you're back because reading each new chapter is a nice highlight to my mornings. I wish you the best of luck that things will work out soon! Oh, and I'm not sure if anyone answered to Ryou and Malik height question so here it is: http://www.absoluteanime.com/yu-gi-oh/bakura.htm and http://www.absoluteanime.com/yu-gi-oh/marik.htm. Ryou is 5'7" and Malik is 5'11". Hope that was helpfull.
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, for break up fics~
I can't recall if I've reviewed before, so I decided to do so again, especially since I've reread some of them. I think my favorite so far is What Hurts The Most. As a request, I'd like to see a Bakura/Seto. Please?
person jeazard
schedule April 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, love the stories! =D

And maybe you have use for these songs?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PBe22HYEbe0
"What about us" by John Barrowman. =)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GLr_RcOS8Aw
"Between" by Vienna Teng

Also, you write Seto really well! ^_^x *thumbs up*
Keep up the great work!
~jea
~jea
person jeazard
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Before he Cheats"
I like the chapter in general - idea and writing are good - and the previous chapters were great as well. Just one thing:
I think Yami wouldn't react like this; he'd face things, not run away. In that situation, I think it would hev been very much like him to just walk into that bar and wait for Yugi and Seto to come back from the bathroom and confront them. He'd have this air of superiority about him, even if inside he wanted to cry. After he resolved things he might still have left for Egypt, but the car thing is a little heavy. =/
Still, great stories, gonna read the rest now. =)
~jea
person jeazard
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Beautiful Disaster"
Since every chapter is so drstically different, they kinda all deserve seperate feedbacks. XD
I LOVED this chapter, it's way awesome. The style was beautiful, the story complex and full of secrets with a nice twist at the end. Poor Yugi.
I'd actually love to read more of this. =)
person jeazard
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Breakdown"
GOD, this is so awesome! So wonderfully messed up and freaky and WRONG and just right!
I'm so glad you did another one in this line. =)
~jea
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Poor Yugi looks like he is second best to everyone. Yami really wants Seto but will take Yugi and Seto wants Yami but not Yugi and will take Joey insted.
person Teania
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well...
It was...

...Really nice.;) I liked it. :) the ending wasn't exactly what I was suspecting, but I did like it alot.I kind of had in mind that while they were on the phone, Yami would get into the accident and they would reunite at the hospital and get back together or yami might die or something, but I did say not to be a deathfic, so yea. I still liked it very much. Thank you for writing it for me
I didn't mean to make it drain you or anything, but thanks for sticking with it! :) I really did like it alot and again, Thanks alot! :D
-teania
person catti
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes...Tae wants Yami but Yami wants Yugi and Yugi wants Yami...BTW...love the whole Yugi-Bakura-Ryo psych series cannot wait for an update..bows to the master on that one..if you ever want to collaborate let me know...love to write a short storie or one-shot with you...catti