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for Kyoufu

by Lechan

person crazyb1tch85
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really cute!!! even if it was fluff, it was still a bit angsty (i don't like pure fluff, is like givving me sugar topped with pure honey >_<). I don't remember ever reading this kind of plot, usually Yami and Yuugi have to fight against a powerful enemy or have really serious issues, but a fight from nowhere, now that's new ^^. not all fights begin with a reason, sometimes you just fight because you're feeling pissy, and I think even yami and Yugi can have these kind of fights, after all they're a couple ^^

I loved the last scene, where Yami suddenly hugs Yuugi (and so on); the yamis are usually very possessive and territorial, so I guess Yami's worries are comprehensible (it's in his nature) and so are his actions. He can't think of anybody else than Yuugi, the one who released him and showed him so much patience and friendship (heck, i would fall in love with him), so feeling insecure should me a must. ^^

I hope i see more Yami/Yuugi fics from you, your style is detailed enough, yet it's not full of useless descriptions, and i could imagine every scene, cu~te. ^^^
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww that is so sweet